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I've told you before, Yvonne, this is really well done. I was surprised when he introduced himself as Clark Kent, but I guess it doesn't really make much difference, does it? Except that he's helping the Planet's sales figures this way  And the orange line still cracked me up. It's such a serious and intense story and then this totally off-the-wall comment comes in...  Anyway, speaking of cheerful things, let's go on to the funeral...  PJ
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Omg, I rolled in laughter over the handwriting thing. Personally speaking, I find it difficult to read my own handwriting sometimes, so I pity everyone else because it turns into a whole deciphering process.
I.......feel bad that Lana's dead. Fool thou art, but still she didn't deserve death.
Great, great part.
JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Not sure this long-distance telepathy is such a good thing. Could become rather 'inconvenient' at times.
We all know that Trask had Lana killed. She doesn't have the guts to do it herself. This might work just as well as anything Trask could do to destroy Clark. The rumors, and speculation will severly damage Superman's ability to 'help'. Especially if his relationship with Lois becomes known.
Don't think it would be a good idea for Lois to go to the funeral.
Tank (who figures that Lois and Clark will now have to distance themselves from each other and not be able to live happily ever after)
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The plot keeps twisting and turning. I thought we were headed for a happy ending but I guess not. Keep writing! More soon. ~Lois Lane Wanna Be
"Live with intention.
Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
Practice wellness.
Play with abandon.
Laugh.
Choose with no regret.
Continue to learn.
Appreciate your friends.
Do what you love.
Live as if this is all there is."
~Mary Anne Radmacher
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Still reading and still surprised by the roller=coaster ride.
James
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Hi, Great part.  He should open up a full investigation and blame the goverment before Trask do something. He shouldn't have said his name. More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Poor Lana! After all, in the end she turned out to be a lot nicer and more human for that matter than we originally thought. I understand very well, that Clark is devastated and blames himself for her death. Like the others, I also love the handwriting thing. Just hillarious! 
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