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AHHHHHRHRRRRRRGGGGG! I just knew that when the guys asked to use his bathroom he was in trouble! Get back here soon Yvonne you evil woman! Damn! I hope Lois didn't listen to him. Now our Clark has to travel back and get her! Ok looking forward to more soon. (Gee the guys just doesn't get a break!) Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Yvonne I swear I am going to need some kryptonite and a car myself unless you kill me first with your story and cliff-hangers. How could you leave us in suspsence like that! That weak bladder thing made me think Clark was traped in one of those "Gotta go, gotta go" comercials. hehe  Excellent...need more...please! 
"Live with intention.
Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
Practice wellness.
Play with abandon.
Laugh.
Choose with no regret.
Continue to learn.
Appreciate your friends.
Do what you love.
Live as if this is all there is."
~Mary Anne Radmacher
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Powerful stuff, Yvonne. Speaking of cockroaches, can I smash Trask? Grind him under my heel like the dirty bug he is... or would that be over the top? Clark was having a tough enough time already, with all the lies and deceptions going around. Would it make him feel better to realize that now, with his differences revealed, there's one *less* lie? Nah, probably not.  Poor guy... PJ
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Thanks for all the feedback.  Most appreciated. I'm afraid, thought, that CK,TIYL may have to take a sabbatical. I don't yet have enough to post anything next Monday and I don't anticipate having enough time between now and then to get much more written. I'll keep you posted but things aren't looking good. Sorry! Yvonne
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LOL! James. I'm really quite nice when you get to know me, honest.  Anyway, good news for this week - it would appear that I have sufficient words for a full-ish section, which I'll post shortly. Next week, however, is a different matter. Keep your fingers crossed! Yvonne
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Actually, the attack by Trask is the best thing that could have happened to Clark. This way the revelation of a 'real' bad guy can be used to take the pressure off Clark. If Trask hadn't been so stupid as to go after Clark now, he could have just let public suspicion after Lana's death ruin any chance for Superman to succeed.
Tank (who says that's the way of the bad guys, they always do something to mess up their own grand plan)
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Tank, you're a genius! I won't say why, but suffice to say you've solved a knotty problem for me. Yvonne
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Wow, Yvonne! I've just finally caught up on this story, so now I can actually read it when you post. And all I can say is... wow! This is such a great read!
Of course, just when I was starting to relax, thinking, "Okay, we've passed the worst parts and now we can relax into the denouement, all Clark's problems are solved and everything's going to be okay," then... WHAM! That's definitely one of the advantages of the boards, where one can't know how long the story will be... one also can't know if the story is nearing the finish or not.
So. The moment the guy asked about using the bathroom, I knew something bad was going to happen. I'm glad that our Clark was connected with that Clark when it happened, at least. I hope he can do something to help, although I don't know what! Would be cool if our Lois could communicate with that Lois telepathically, wouldn't it? Except no superpowers.
I guess this means that now we deal with Trask and Skywatch before we get a happy ending. You are going to give us a happy ending at least, right? But that Clark definitely has a few positive things on his side... he's learned how to use some of his superpowers, and he's got a telepathic superhero from another dimension on his side. Let's see him kick some butt!
I'll look forward to reading the next part as soon as you have it!
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