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Well, that was a nice rollercoaster ride!

I half expected that the Kent's deaths where Trask related, but it didn't lessen the impact of the revelation.

Liked the touch about the minister hinting on knowing Clark's secret.

I like this Lois very much, too bad she didn't give him a flesh wound...

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Hi,

Great part. razz I don't believe Trask.


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“Aren’t you Jonathan Kent’s son? Clark, isn’t it?”

Clark blinked, surprised to be identified by someone he’d never met before. His parents didn’t even attend church regularly. “That’s right.”

The minister chuckled. “It’s a small parish and I’m a frequent customer of your father’s hot dog stand at the corn festival.”

“I get it.” He sipped some more water. “Dad loves running that stand.”

“I know – it shows.” The minister smiled. “I don’t often see you in here, Clark.”
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I'm not good at English but, got the feeling that Jonathan and Martha are not dead.
You got the right idea -- the guy was talking to "our" Clark, and of course his parents are still living. The confusing part might have been that our Clark was telepathically keeping in touch with alt-Clark, and even managed to transfer the pain of Kryptonite to himself so that alt-Clark could function. Which is one heck of a trick, but hey, when you've got telepathy and body-switching already, what's a little bit more? goofy

Yvonne, I've said it before and may say it again: This was *intense.* Good job.

So... when do I see more of this????

PJ


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