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So, this is the end, for now.

Nice story. Well thought out.

I just have one question...

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flicking a glance at the hob to check that the pasta wasn’t boiling over
What the heck is a hob???

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


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Uhm, in regard of "hob":

http://www.thefreedictionary.com/hob

I didn't know this word either so I'd have used cooking stove or something like that.

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Good work, Yvonne.

I especially like Clark grabbing that reporter to prove he's not running away wink You've not got everything wrapped up, but pretty nearly.

So... Clark's still got a ways to go, but at least now he's firmly on the right track. Which is a huge improvement on how he was at the beginning of this fic. See, when you were torturing him, it was all for his own good... wink

Thanks for letting me help with this, it's been fun!

PJ


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