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FDK:Northern Lights-Part 4 #24352 09/25/05 11:14 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:Northern Lights-Part 4 #24353 09/25/05 12:47 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120 shells Hack from Nowheresville
shells Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120	you've got me intrigued. i have a few ideas about what might be happening - but for now i'm looking forward to more posts so i can see if i'm guessing correctly! so when can we expect part 5? shells You must be the change you wish to see in the world. - Mahatma Gandhi

Re: FDK:Northern Lights-Part 4 #24354 09/26/05 10:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Lois seemed a little too much first season Lois, but other than that, great post! I want more soon!!! James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: FDK:Northern Lights-Part 4 #24355 09/26/05 12:45 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	You always end it when I'm getting involved! Feeling like a detective, figuring things out!!! I really like the direction this is going in Keep it coming~ ~NICOLE

Re: FDK:Northern Lights-Part 4 #24356 09/26/05 05:45 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,656 Canada MLT Merriwether
MLT Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,656 Canada	I really enjoy the verbal swordplay here between Lois and Anna. I think it works well - as does the conversation between Lois and Clark afterwards. Keep it up. ML She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again. - CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane

Re: FDK:Northern Lights-Part 4 #24357 09/28/05 10:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada G gerry Columnist
gerry Columnist G Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada	Thank you for reading the story and your comments. Maria, your comments for every post keep me going. Shells and Nicole, there aren't too many really big surprises, but I think it's a worthwhile read, anyway. Glad you're sticking with me. James, I think Lois may seem season 1, but that could be because that's my favourite Lois. Would you mind pointing out where you think she's out of character for a married Lois. She might need some tweaking. ML, loved writing this Lois and Clark. :rolleyes: Part Five coming up very soon. gerry

Re: FDK:Northern Lights-Part 4 #24358 09/28/05 11:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Going back over it and reading it more throughly, I can understand Lois' reactions. She hates being in the dark about anything and Ann was pushing all the wrong buttons. Henderson would have at least known to promise an exclusive... Don't change a thing. James. “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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