You seem to be reacting the right way so Part Twelve will probably prove your statements right.
I don't think he had time to put things together.
or give an answer to your hopes
Those concerns may be addressed in part twelve.
Unfortunately,
Hopefully, she will realise David is worth fighting for.
Anna knows this, but I think the fight has left her since she knows she's in the wrong.
Thanks everyone for your feedback. It lets me know that my story is on the right track. But why doesn't anyone care about Jeremy Hamilton's murder? Is he just part of a throw-away A-plot?
Due to popular request, part twelve will appear shortly.
gerry