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FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25298 11/11/05 08:30 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. OP Top Banana
OP Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Absolutely liked it! You had me dreading for a while that Lois was not alive or something crazy like that when the kids were with Martha and only Clark was mentioned... Hmmm, threat on the kids? Who do you have in mind? Intergang or someone new? Awaiting next post... If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25299 11/11/05 10:20 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Sarah A great start! I can't wait to see what happens. Who is after Lois and Clark? Tricia

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25300 11/12/05 04:09 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Good start Curious about the bad guys Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25301 11/12/05 04:40 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Nice start! I also thought maybe Lois and Clark were dead. Nice to see they aren't. Go Emily! Get that Nathan kid! Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25302 11/12/05 06:29 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy S Simona Top Banana
Simona Top Banana S Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy	A little bully on the path of redemption? Quite a way to start a puppy love, with a black eye! I like how you get Emily's struggle with her blossoming powers, very well written! simona

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25303 11/12/05 07:27 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT Features Writer
ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	Interesting...but only three parts? I feel almost cheated. This could be fun for a long ride. Well, keep up the good work. I like the bits about the problems the developing abilities are causing, and the developing romance...er...antipathy, between the bully and the super-hero.

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25304 11/12/05 12:13 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	I'd start naming the things I like about this story, but I'll take the shortcut and say I like everything about it! It's great! Looking forward to the next parts! See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25305 11/12/05 01:21 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great start. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25306 11/12/05 01:57 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England SNL Hack from Nowheresville
SNL Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England	This is a brilliant story. I'm rally looking forward to some more. But only three parts? Keep on writing, SNL

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25307 11/12/05 02:13 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Ooh, interesting, Sarah! I'm not normally a fan of nextgen stories, but I liked this. You've written Emily's struggles coping with superpowers so vividly. It's not all fun and games, is it? Clark's so sweet in this, too. And I'll be fascinated to see what you do with Nathan, who doesn't seem to be quite so nasty after all...? Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK: Growing up Super - 1 #25308 11/12/05 06:48 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 151 Likes: 1 Greenbelt, Maryland Meerkat Hack from Nowheresville
Meerkat Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 151 Likes: 1 Greenbelt, Maryland	Thanks for your comments, everybody! Well, it was only 3 parts. I've tried to flesh out the "bad guy" storyline just a bit, so I think now it's going to be 4 parts. But I don't intend to turn it into a long story, it's suited best to being something short and quick, I think. Yes, Lois and Clark, Martha and Jonathan are all alive. I'm not the type to kill off anybody in either of my favorite pairs! And now, I hope you're ready for Part 2! Recently revised, so hopefully I haven't edited in any typos. Thanks again for reading!

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