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#25521 11/17/05 08:51 AM
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Hi,

Great part. drool


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“I guess I just wasn't... attracted to you, Lois," he could have said. But he didn’t want to lie to her about that.
:rolleyes: I always thought that was # 1 stupid thing to said.


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He was tempted - so *very* tempted - to pretend he’d been affected. “Lois Lane, I love you,” he could say, and he could kiss her… like he wanted to.
:rolleyes: This was # 2.


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*Had* to.

He *wanted* to do barrel rolls.

Loop some loops.

Do handstands in the clouds.

Write ‘I love Lois Lane’ in huge letters in the sky.

Kiss Lois again.

That had been an amazing kiss… an awe-inspiring kiss.

An addictive kiss.

A kiss he was likely to repeat if he didn’t remove himself right away.
drool Love it.


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<That’s probably the first time in my life I’ve ever even *thought* of ‘settle’ and ‘flying’ in the same sentence.>
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#25522 11/18/05 05:57 AM
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Treeful of cats.
Congratulations. You managed to make me choke on my water. I really need to stop reading while eating. HILARIOUS.

This part was so cute. I always love how he's competing with himself--what was he thinking wink .

Great part. Looking forward to the next one.


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#25523 11/18/05 06:21 AM
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Ditto. It was great, cute and so funny!

Ann

#25524 11/18/05 06:45 AM
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Sigh... I am still floating....LAura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
#25525 11/18/05 07:11 PM
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A wonderful part! smile1

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#25526 11/19/05 06:20 PM
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Thank you all again!! blush

I'm glad you liked the part about Lois's walls, Maria - that was one of my favorite bits to write. And I agree with you as to Clark's reply to Lois in the original episode - even if he had to think quickly, saying he just wasn't attracted to her was pretty dumb. I always thought it was kind of out-of-character for him, especially in light of his other really lame excuses. He should have been able to come up with something else.

You guys are quoting some of the stuff I like best about this section, too. The 'settling for flying' part, and the 'treeful of cats' part. I tried to stick with alternatives to 'kettle of fish' that applied to Clark. Glad it worked. smile

Thanks so much for sticking with me!

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