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That was certainly a different take on BatP/HOL. Well done! 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Cute!  Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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 Oh, and there was this: Perry, Clark, Jimmy, and Jack were her friends. I just *knew* you couldn't go a whole story without mentioning Jack.  How short the story may be.  Saskia (secretly hoping that if Jana's writing again there's hope for a certain sequel...)
I tawt I taw a puddy cat!
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Good story. I have not read any of your other stories so I am not familiar with your writting style and therefore can not comment if it resembled it. The story was good...short, sweet and to the point.
Thanks, Judy
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A very nicestory, I love it! simona
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Nice,
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Welcome back, Jana! And what do you mean, "rusty"? This is a very nice and well-written story!! I liked it a lot. I hope you'll keep writing! Happy birthday again, Sas See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Hi, Cute!  MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Jana I'm so glad to see you writing again.  I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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Hi Jana,
It's good to see this being posted and I think it works very well. This is a lovely little in between episodes fic and I can see Lois and Clark acting this way.
Really great to see you writing again.
Yours Jenni
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Really, really nice, Jana! And now that you've shown us you can still write, I think it's about time that we had some more lovely stories from you... don't you?  Happy birthday, Saskia! Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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What? No smoochies?  Write more soon Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Aw, what a sweet little reunion. Nice job! ~Julia 
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Wow. First of all, thank you all very much. I'm just giddy over the responses. (FDK, the new wonder drug. Thank you SO much to each of you who took the time to read this and post your thoughts. I have to admit I was very nervous about posting this because I hadn't visited the boards in so long and hadn't written anything in even longer. It made me feel good to have such a warm response. With that in mind, many thanks Sheila, Jackie, Sas, Judy, Simona, An, Laura, Anna, Maria, Tricia, Jenni, Wendy, Jose, and Julia. Jana (who wonders if there's a reason Dan Sardine, er Scardino hasn't made it to Maria's list yet)
"Don't you people have lives?!?" ~Joe on Wings
"An eternal, burning flame. Hope lives on and love remains." ~from Love Remains, by Collin Raye
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Leave town for a week and miss the big news. And this is a very sweet piece, Jana. Now, about that unfinished wip of yours - the sequel - still want to know how things turn out for Wolfe. c
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Thank you for taking the time to read my story, Carol. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for my supposed wip, with this fall under plausible deniability? Truthfully though, I would like to finish Wolf's story. Hopefully I'll actually find the time. Glad to know you and Sas are still interested. Thanks again for your comments. Jana (who if asked, will still deny having any work in progress)
"Don't you people have lives?!?" ~Joe on Wings
"An eternal, burning flame. Hope lives on and love remains." ~from Love Remains, by Collin Raye
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