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So... reactions? PJ
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intersting. Looking foeard to where this goes next. LAura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Really, she ought to consider implanting post-hypnotic suggestions for people to pay her bill promptly. It wasn't strictly ethical, but it strongly appealed to her all the same. Very funny Apparently a fireball crashed near West River last night. I've got the address. It may have landed somewhere in Metropolis; it was too small to track with any accuracy. Apparantly, Lois has better connections than Trask "You need some professional help -- and luckily for you, I know a really great hypno-therapist." How can you end it there? Please post more soon
Anyone can do any amount of work, provided it isn't the work he is supposed to be doing at that moment. ~Robert Benchley
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Hi, Great part.
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Ack! No, Kari, no! Take him to Brenda and Francine. Kal, RUN AWAY!!!!
Too bad Lois can't use the bond to figure out which direction he's in, and use it like a homing beacon...
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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No! That has to be one of the most evil cliffhangers in existence! He can't see Gwen Porter! I'm looking forward to seeing how you pull Kal and Lois out of this dire situation. Keep up the good work! Jen
Wash: Everything looks good from here...Yes. Yes, this is a fertile land, and we will thrive. We will rule over all this land, and we will call it... "This Land." I think we should call it "your grave!" Ah, curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal! Ha ha HA! Mine is an evil laugh! Now die!
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Pam This is excellent. Tricia
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Hmmm, okay... Gwen works for Trask but she doesn't seem to like him a lot... so there's still hope Jose
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Just finished catching up with the last 4 parts. Wow, that was wonderful! Now that we got the mushy stuff over with... Still, the principle remained. An object in motion remains in motion until acted upon by an outside force. He was merely adding that outside force. He was still invulnerable; in fact, the sunlight seemed to be boosting his energy just a bit. He put his fists together in front of him, flying head-on toward the rock.
A few endless moments passed, then with shocking suddenness, the rock filled his vision and he was very close to it. Traveling very fast. Despite himself, he ducked his head between his two outstretched arms, and braced for impact. no !!! James
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Evil? Moi? Nah. I'm just trying to keep life interesting Vive, Lois has connections "on the street" whereas Trask was working from NASA sensors. And as Gwen will tell you, NASA is incredibly unreliable... I mean, they can't even keep track of all those alien abductions! Totally useless. Next section coming up... Thanks all, for the kind words! PJ
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