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What a lovely ending!

I love how she's hauling him down by his tie and shoving him back to the ground.

Very WAFFy conversation there between the two of them about her having the heart of the strongest man...

And the last line? Perfection!

I really enjoyed this and look forward to your next offering

Superb!!!
A very nice premise fantastically narrated.

Fun ending! I liked the scene where Lois and Clark are playing the board games. I hope they're having fun floating together...ahem, oh, wait, this wasn't on the nfic boards. Thanks for the story! Susan

What a sweet and funny ending. Beautifully original story, and even a good A-plot, too!

But like Groobie seemed to hint... Maybe this story should have been written for the nfic folder. At least, I did think it was a waste of a good honeymoon suite for Lois and Clark to spend almost all their time there on the couch, and it was a waste of a perfectly good king-size tub to take a bath together in it with their swimsuits on!!!

Ann

Awwww!!!! I LOVE THIS!!! I know I've been soooo bad with this story !! I'd begun reading it when you first started posting, but only caught up tonight, reading the whole thing (I have to say, though, not having to wait was a perk)! And let me tell you right now, I LOVE THIS!

I loved the premise in the beginning, and LOVE how you developed it!! Clark's control of his powers... it's just an interesting, creative and original idea! We've seen eps where he does things that he cannot control (Pilot & floating out of attraction for Lois, an obvious example, which was one of your inspirations in this). And you show his struggle so nicely . And just his feelings! He's so human! But dealing with these superhuman things about himself - I think it's perfectly sweet and in character, him dealing with changes in his life - like meeting the woman he loves and then getting through a conversation with her without winding up on the ceiling - with not full control of his emotions and powers, which when combined could lead to trouble I was relieved that Lois learned he's Superman, so she can help him from now on!!! They can work to control his powers together!!

I could see Ann's suggestion about this making a good nfic, as a honeymoon suite+lack of control of powers+Lois being in on the secret could all = a *very* interesting situation!! lol

I really really loved the last line:

Beautiful

Anyway, thanks for making my night; this was waffy and sweet and put a huge smile on my face! I can't wait to see what you've got in store next~

Great story

~NICOLE

(sorry if my comments are all over the place, it's really late right now!!)

Sweet ending. Good job. Laura

Hi,

Beautiful story.

MAF

Janet

A wonderful ending! I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to your next story.

Tricia