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well? what did you think?

This is good. This is very good. The tone is muted, although the mention of Lex's smile and the effect it had on her is chilling. This young lady has a lot going on under the surface, and I'm thinking it's going to explode impressively sometime soon.

And what impact would her knowing that Superman is her daddy have on her? What kind of questions would she ask her mother? Or Lex? Or Superman, when she finally meets him as her father? What did Clark know, and when did he know it? The dramatic possibilities are scary.

So, when's the next post?

Hi. This is very... um... I don't know how to translate it in to english.

Lets just say that this is giving me a feeling of curiosity. A very *curious* feeling of curiosity.

(and it is not a negative feeling. )

This is a very intresting premise. By changing one small thing (in this case having Clark be affected by the pheromone spray) you have developed a story that has endless possibilites. While other stories have been written about Clark being affected by the spray, I am not aware of any stories where a child results.

This story is very original and I look forward to reading future parts. As of right now, I am wondering several things:

When Clark learned Lois was pregnant, did he tell her his secret?

How did Lois and Clark's relationship play out?

How did Luthor come in to the fray?

I suppose future parts will (hopefully) at least touch upon these points.

-Em

When the prologue of this was posted, I shied away from it when I saw "Luthor Lane" in the title. Hee, I am such a big fan of L&C and just despise all things Luthor.

But the title of the FDK folder caught my eye and I decided that perhaps I wanted to check it out. I scanned through Chapter One, and was intrigued by the voice of Artemis, so I started from the prologue and worked by way through the two threads. And I am so glad I did.

As I said, I like the voice of this young girl, and the little shots of life that come from her perspective. I am so curious about how her extended family came to be the way it is.

I really look forward to the next installment. Do you have a set posting schedule in mind?

Actully...I'm gonna post Chapter 2...well...quite possablly immidently, and Chapter 3 whenever I get it typed up...so in other words...er...no...no set posting schedule.

Thank you all for the wonderful reviews! I've gotten verry attached to this character, and will continue writing this until I come to some sort of ending...which I can't quite see in the immident future but...hey, that just means It'll go for a while. O.K., next chapter up soon.