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#28910 04/03/06 08:25 AM
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She has a "carrot complex", hasn't she? [Linked Image] LOL! thumbsup

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#28911 04/03/06 08:30 AM
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Hee! laugh Nice little story, and I love the ending! Lots of fun!

Mind if I point out a typo?
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Lois stifled a yawned
She should've stifled a *yawn* wink

Keep up the good work!
AnnaBtG.


What we've got here is failure to communicate...
#28912 04/03/06 09:11 AM
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ROTFL!!! rotflol That was hilarious!

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Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
#28913 04/03/06 10:07 AM
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That was hilarious! I was on the edge of my seat, worried for Clark about the retribution Lois would exact... and then he was saved by the carrot! I love it. Thanks for the laugh.


Chris
"Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."
#28914 04/03/06 01:34 PM
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Hi,

Cute! thumbsup


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#28915 04/03/06 01:53 PM
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Ooh, this kind of thinking cannot bode well for Clark...
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Then it hit her. <I like the lighting; makes them look…bigger.> - Bigger than *what*? He didn’t have anything to compare to...

<It’s smaller than I thought.> Clark. He had commented about the size. Had he told Superman?

<It’s smaller than I thought.>

<I like the lighting; makes them look…bigger.>
... but then she wakes up to look at what she's written down and is (rightfully) *really* confused goofy

Great story smile

~Nicole smile

#28916 04/03/06 03:54 PM
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thumbsup laugh


Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.

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I'm with Nicole, Cherry. This demands a sequel! How about Lois chewing away on a carrot for lunch, then Clark comments:

"That's all you're going to eat? Of course, it's a really *big* one!"

That ought to do it! laugh

Ann

#28918 04/04/06 06:45 AM
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Absolutely hilarious...


If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.

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#28919 04/04/06 01:16 PM
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hahaha! that was good!

#28920 04/07/06 08:58 PM
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She should've stifled a *yawn* [Wink]

Keep up the good work!
AnnaBtG.
Whoops! blush I've fixed it now. Thanks for pointing it out for me.

Awwww... Thanks for the nice comments everyone. And Ann...I'll think about the sequel, okay? :p


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#28921 04/08/06 01:38 AM
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What a great little story! thumbsup

I laughted out loud when I read the word "carrot" at the end. That was a great twist laugh

keep up the good work

FinLi


Clark: "Can I have a rat chief? Can I, huh? Please?"

Perry: "Clark, do you want me to send you to the dark room?"

Clark: "The dark room?"
#28922 04/08/06 07:58 PM
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Cherry

This is great. smile1

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#28923 08/12/07 08:28 AM
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cool - just found the story on lcfanfic.com and only wanted to say: laugh

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Originally posted by Cherry:
And Ann...I'll think about the sequel, okay? :p
is there already one?


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