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Awwww...this is such a cute story. Warm and fuzzy. 
"How many times must I tell you? Queens consume nectars and ambrosia, not hot dogs."
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Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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This is adorable, Dave. What can I say? It's about discovering, really seeing, that your best friend loves you. And then seeing how everything in the world is different because of that. You are different. Tired old things at work are different. Everything is different, but him. Because he has always loved you. And he is unchanged, because his love is true.
What can I say? So lovely, Dave.
Ann
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Loved that, Dave. Made me feel warm and fuzzy, most definitely.
Chris
"Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."
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Awwww Dave! That gave me all kinds of WAFFy feelings. In fact, I think I'm a little verklempt, oh, I can't say anything else, talk amongst yourselves! 
Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.
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So sweet! You have such a way with words. 
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. 
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This is lovely, Dave! Definitely up to your usual standard.  And, as you can probably guess,  I adore your use of the present tense here. Very, very nice indeed! And so good to see you writing again. Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Aww! This is so wonderful. Sweet and WAFFy. Excellent use of the language that draws the reader right in. Kudos! The last line brought a smile to my face. Good to see something from you! And I hope to see more! See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Smooth. And that's part one of, oh, I don't know, five or six, right?  Jen
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Awww! *hugs story tightly* That was so sweeet! And just... gah! My vocabulary's broke...  But I simply adored the SNOT out of this!! *Hugs it again*
Mmm cheese.
I vid, therefor I am.
The hardest lesson is that love can be so fair to some, and so cruel to others. Even those who would be gods.
Anne Shirley: I'm glad you spell your name with a "K." Katherine with a "K" is so much more alluring than Catherine with a "C." A "C" always looks so smug.
Me: *cries*
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Hi, Interesting! The coffee, when he brings it to her, tastes the same... His smile as he places a donut on her desk... Exactly the same, only different too. His face, his hair, his eyes, unchanged, but different.
Familiar and yet completely different. That how Lois mind work. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Like I mentioned in the other thread... (holy cow, two threads <g>)... Wow! I *really* didn't expect such a positive response to a story in which nothing happened and nothing changed! But thank you, everyone, who commented. Hopefully I'll have time to come back and comment properly, but I'm in a bit of a rush at the moment, but... thank you. Really. Every single comment just blew me away.
'I just kind of died for you;
You just kind of stared at me'
- Aurora, Foo Fighters
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