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Raise your hand if you think there should be more! devil

Seriously, though, Dave...

Whether or not there's more to the story (you know you want to write more), it kills just the way it is! (Though you should write more!) It's heartbreaking... and every time I read it, I find (myself wanting more) something new that wrenches my heart.

And... since I'm supposed to be writing, that's it for now. wink

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*raises hand* Count me in with the wanting more, Sara!! Definitely wink

(and I'll be back in a few...)

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Agh! There's 2 comment threads! I already posted on the other one - saw it first.

Okay, loved it! Definitely want more. Gave me all those good WAFFy feelings. In fact, it just got me all choked up - DJ wipes tear from eye.

Great job Dave! thumbsup

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Well, I was all set to just come in here and play it cool and casual. You know, "Dave, gee, that's a swell story." That kind of thing. But then I re-read it... again. And... well... once again...

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Great story! And I won't say I want more (but ... wink )

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WOW, this is lovely. smile1

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Yep, what the others said...!

This was lovely and summed up so many emotions so succinclty.

Beautiful smile

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I agree with the others...this is absoulutely beautiful!

And there should be more! More I say!


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wave wave way up lol


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The thunderous roar of everything that's unspoken between them...
One of the features I like best about your stories, Dave, is your innovative use of language. You paint word pictures that have me nodding in agreement because they capture the facts of life.

And yet again, you outdid yourself.

But more is...more, after all. goofy


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Wow!

I *really* didn't expect such a positive response to a story in which nothing happened and nothing changed! wink

But thank you, everyone, who commented. smile Hopefully I'll have time to come back and comment properly, but I'm in a bit of a rush at the moment, but... thank you. Really. Every single comment just blew me away. smile


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