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#29374 04/24/06 10:42 PM
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Nice story! Very well-done!

Keep up the good work! thumbsup

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#29375 04/26/06 01:26 AM
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Thanks for the feedback Anna! I appreciate it!


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A very believable in-between scene. I can see both of them doing exactly what you showed in your story.(and Clark, as usual, being a lunkhead).

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Hee hee. laugh Thanks Nan! Me too. Sometimes I just want to smack him and say "would you just tell her!?"


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A wonderful in-between scene! smile1 I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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#29379 04/27/06 11:37 PM
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Oh thank you TriciaW! I try really hard to get the characters in mind when I write so that when you read, hopefully, it's like watching them them on the show.

I really appreciate your compliment! smile1


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I don't know how I missed this one!! Ditto what's already been said, DJ - I, too, thought the characterization was great smile

I really loved this exchange:

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I know you'll think this was ridiculous of me Clark, but I told Superman about my feelings for him,...and he rejected me. I think that played at least a part in why I accepted Lex's proposal. I felt so lonely and rejected after that. I thought maybe I could grow to love Lex, since he obviously did love me." Clark felt a pang of guilt at the mention of Superman's rejection of her. So, he was at least partly to blame for what she'd done. If he had just found some way to get past his wounded pride and give her something to hold on to, even if it was *Superman*, she might not have ever agreed to marry Luthor. It surprised Clark at how open and honest Lois was being with him about her feelings. She must be feeling vulnerable right now, he thought. He wished he could go over there, to her apartment, and comfort her. But that was not a job for Clark, her forever friend; maybe Superman, but he was *grounded*. He would just have to be content to comfort her with his words.

"I don't think that was ridiculous. You needed to know how he felt about you. Don't kid yourself Lois, Superman cares for you, he always has. You can see it in his eyes and the way he's always there to help you...I'm sorry he wasn't there to help you today," Clark told her with difficulty.

"That's okay, you were there, Clark.
thumbsup Love that she is acknowledging (to herself *and* to him) how important Clark is to her. That him being there meant so much. And also, I love that in this in-between scene, she is honest with Clark about what transpired between her and Superman, at the same time letting him know - so honestly - that it had something to do with her bad *bad* decision to marry Lex. It does show how vulnerable she is, that she's telling him this at all... but it also shows that she wants to do her part to get her and Clark back on track as at least best friends. For now wink

Very nice!! Can't wait to see your big story!

~NICOLE smile

#29381 04/29/06 05:36 AM
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Thanks Nicole! I can't wait to start posting it. I think part 1 is almost ready to post. Maybe in the next couple of days. What I'm stuck on right now is the right title. grumble


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This was a great story too. Thank you so much.


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