I have no time to write feedback right now, but the rest of the week and next week looks just as bad, so - Marcy, I'm so glad to see this story continue. I loved Clark's musings about Lois's freak ficus attack on him, and as usual, you put this adorable image in my mind. I also loved the way they both tried to grab the receiver when the phone rang, and how he accidentally put his hand over hers, and how the electrical charge passing between them made him reel back as if stung. And you had me grinning almost as widely as Clark, as he was eavesdropping on poor Scardino's misadventures and trying to hide his smile.
Oh, and it was nice to see Clark finally come clean with Lois about his Superman identity. I noticed that you made Clark feel sort of smug and self-satisfied because his revelation that he was Superman made Lois speechless. Interestingly, that's exactly how Clark was feeling in FinLi's adorable The Naked Truth, where Clark spun out of his civvies in front of Lois to show her that he was Superman - except that he had forgotten to put on his suit. Oh-oh.
Keep this coming! It's always a joy to read the stuff you've written.
Ann
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Please post more soon.