How nice to see you post this, DJ! I really enjoyed your two-part story about Lois's haircut, but this is so ambitious and well-written, it is interesting on so many levels, you are weaving together a number of hugely interesting plot elements, and you really make me feel that you can turn this into a rich, complex and wonderful story.
As for my favorite part of this story - well, with my preferences, I can tell you I just
loved the sweet, waffy and tenderly erotic interaction between Lois and Clark. I love it that they have a child, and you are going to make me even happier if you let them have another one.
But, DJ! Please understand that I can take only so much when you endanger children. You are posting in the PG-13 folder, after all, and while I, a Swede, sometimes shake my head at the way that many American parents seem to accept that their kids get exposed to high levels of fictional violence, I hope that you will protect sensitive readers such as myself from too many bad and horrible things. In other words: Please, please, please don't let anything nasty happen to any of the children in this story!!!
Once again, DJ, it's great to see that you, a newcomer, are posting such an ambitious and well-written story!
Ann
Great L&C interaction. Good villain, too -- but I'm with Ann; I can't take too much threatening of children... it's an interesting approach to getting rid of Superman, though, I must say. With Clark's overactive sense of guilt, this is gonna be an interesting ride... Good thing Lois is there to keep telling him that it's *not* his fault...
)for the cliffhanger at the end but I wanted to make sure the readers were in anticipation of the next part. 
But did want to let you know that I think what I've seen of your story has been excellent, DJ. 
Aww, thanks everyone! You're comments are really appreciated. I have to give credit to my BR's. They've been so great to help me out with my grammar and punctuation issues. They've also kept me honest.