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Th-thump-th-th-crack!... or FDK: The Death Of You And Me #30011 05/21/06 09:49 PM
Joined: Nov 2004 Posts: 457 QLD, Australia D Dave OP Beat Reporter
OP Dave Beat Reporter D Joined: Nov 2004 Posts: 457 QLD, Australia	That is the sound a heart makes when it breaks. Honest. You can trust me, I'm the self proclaimed Sound King. And... Yes, I'll take all the credi-... blame for this one! Anyway, you know how much I loved this story Nicole! (Can you believe she wasn't going to post?) I could probably quote at least two thirds of the story in here, but I'll contain myself. ahem I especially loved... this line: Quote His heart stopped. But mine broke. That's just... it. Perfect. And this bit: Quote If someone had only told me how everything could… how he would… I wouldn’t have gone. But I went. And he went. We went together. And then... Quote How could I not have let him know? A compliment here. A touch there. And... and... deep breath Perfect. Dave 'I just kind of died for you; You just kind of stared at me' - Aurora, Foo Fighters

Re: Th-thump-th-th-crack!... or FDK: The Death Of You And Me #30012 05/22/06 12:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Phew! For a moment, I thought she had killed herself. Beautiful story. So touching! See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: Th-thump-th-th-crack!... or FDK: The Death Of You And Me #30013 05/22/06 01:38 AM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 94 Hershey, Pa FinLi Freelance Reporter
FinLi Freelance Reporter Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 94 Hershey, Pa	call me morbid, but I love these kind of stories. Quote He died for me! Did you know that? He was brave. He was good. He was perfect. And he loved me. Purely. Genuinely. Selflessly. Completely. Can you imagine being loved that much? By someone like him? Can you imagine it? I loved this part...well I love all of it, but this got me. Great job FinLi Clark: "Can I have a rat chief? Can I, huh? Please?" Perry: "Clark, do you want me to send you to the dark room?" Clark: "The dark room?"

Re: Th-thump-th-th-crack!... or FDK: The Death Of You And Me #30014 05/22/06 02:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 93 Canada T tayryn Freelance Reporter
tayryn Freelance Reporter T Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 93 Canada	Amazing, heart wrenching story. Beautifully written and showed the depths of her feelings for, Clark.

Re: Th-thump-th-th-crack!... or FDK: The Death Of You And Me #30015 05/23/06 04:28 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	I'm coming late to this party... and all I can say is wow. This is amazing - so poignant, beautiful, heartwrenching, just about any adjective you can think of. It has me all choked up. Poor, poor Lois. And such beautiful, lovely writing from you! These paras probably affected me most: Quote Did anyone notice the ghost walking through the streets of Metropolis tonight? Does anyone know if ghosts can find each other if they want to badly enough? Can ghosts love each other? And be together? What if one of those ghosts’ hearts didn’t stop? What if it just broke? Is there some place where a living ghost and a dead ghost can be together? Where they can love one another. Where nothing can harm them and nothing can hurt them? Just... wow. Just a fly-by! waves

Re: Th-thump-th-th-crack!... or FDK: The Death Of You And Me #30016 05/25/06 10:29 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Nicole WOW! Tricia

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