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Hi, Great piece. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Very nice, Raquel  . - Alicia
Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)
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 That's all I have to say. Well-written and sad. Jen 
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Heartbreaking, but lovely.
-- Roger
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Raquel This is beautifully written. Tricia 
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Hi Raquel! Congratulations! Your story is lovely. See you soon  Your friend, Anna.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Raquel, what a beautifully written piece!!  What a wonderful, poignant glimpse of Lois's introspection!! (plus a big ole' WAFFY ending)  S (who is sorry if you had to get your dictionary out to decifer this feedback  )
"Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'
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Awww, a sad story, but with a happy ending. I love the last paragraph. Thanks for posting it! Kathy
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Lovely poetry, Raquel. The reunion is the perfect end for the pain. Thanks, claire
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Beautifully done, Raquel, and touching. The last paragraph is perfect as an ending point. Brava! LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Racquel,
lovely story
very touching
merry
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