Well... wow. This is such a fun story. *aptly avoiding using the word 'cute'*
I really enjoyed reading this. Light and fun and just plain sweet in parts. Loved the idea of them having to "fight" though the morning and the idea of Clark keeping count even though he knows Lois will always win the war. <g> This part had me laughing out loud:
8:45 am
"Lois!"
8:50 am
"Lois!"
Very clever. *again, aptly avoiding 'cute'!*
I did notice one little slip - a 'He' that I think should be a 'His'. Under the 8:15 slot. (He glare faded as he looked down at her face.) Otherwise it was absolutely marvelous. Great story.
Dave