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Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Cool stuff - I'm glad I came home for lunch so I can post FDK. It is so sweet that Lois is making Mad Dog Lane go on vacation. I'm happy to see that it isn't just a two parter. 
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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 Thanks Roo! Glad you like the "vacation" idea. It's one of the first parts I wrote for this story, I thought it was amusing and also a great way of forcing Lois to open up to ...possibilities. I'm about halfway through part 3 right now. There will definitely be a part 4, possibly more. 
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Great part. I loved the line this is life knocking at your door and the whole get a life section. This is soooo Lois. Hope she'll remember at the "date" that she sent Mad Dog on vacation. Waiting for part 3.
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 Thanks everyone! I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I loved the line this is life knocking at your door and the whole get a life section. This is soooo Lois. Hope she'll remember at the "date" that she sent Mad Dog on vacation. Yay! I'm happy to hear this -- I rather thought the "life knocking at your door" was clever, but you know... I'm writing it, of course I like it. *lol* So far she does remember that she sent Mad Dog on vacation, but I can't promise she won't forget at some point. Wouldn't be Lois if she was all sugar and sweet, would it? ;-)
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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this is a very nice story, LaraMoon! I'm sorry, I have very little time to give feedback, but I just have to say you I'm reading and liking your fic! I'm waiting for the next part, simona
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Adorable! Looking forward to the date. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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I'm loving it too, but I have extremely little time to write FDK now. But it was adorable to see Lois send Mad Dog Lane on vacation. And agree to a date with Clark! Who is staying at the Lexor, in the honeymoon suite! Really... that's not the kind of place where you'd like to spend the night alone, is it? Ann
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Please don't hit me... I got myself stuck again, I'm at the point where Lois shows up at the Suite, but the words aren't coming anymore and I'm messing everything up. :-( The ideas are there, I just don't know how to go from point A to point B. ARGH!  I really wanted to post part 3 today, but I think it may not come before the week-end. I've been looking at it throughout my entire lunch hour and my afternoon break and it's just not moving forward at all. All I've managed to do is rearrange paragraphs so the continuity isn't all out of whack... *sigh* I'm sowwy!!!
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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