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Poor Clark! or FDK: Mixed Signals #32168 08/27/06 07:01 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA rivka OP Merriwether
OP rivka Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA	Quote The second reason is, in my fantasies, whenever I dreamt about telling her, she always, always slaps me. Every single time. When even a guy's own fantasies don't have good endings . . . Very cute! Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly. - Under the Tuscan Sun

Re: Poor Clark! or FDK: Mixed Signals #32169 08/27/06 07:51 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Cute. I read and read this part though, and I think I know what you mean, but I just can't get it to make any sense: Quote And I... didn’t. Perry turned me away. My dreams of a job at the Planet--shattered. My hopes of meeting Lois were equally unattainable. Didn't what? I assume you mean that he didn't get a job at the Planet but to me it doesn't really seem connected (grammatically speaking) to anything. ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: Poor Clark! or FDK: Mixed Signals #32170 08/27/06 11:52 PM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN Wanda Detroit Beat Reporter
Wanda Detroit Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN	Hi! Thanks for reading!! Classicalla--I think what I was trying to say was: She exuded confidence and professionalism. And I... didn’t. Perry turned me away. My dreams of a job at the Planet--shattered. My hopes of meeting Lois were equally unattainable. (SHE was confident, I wasn't.) He's trying to blame his inexperience and nerves on how come he didn't (initially) get the job. But I agree with you, it is definitely confusing and/or a weird transition. Will be sure to clarify that before I send it on to archives!! Thanks! --Wanda "He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.

Re: Poor Clark! or FDK: Mixed Signals #32171 08/28/06 09:04 AM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr... Matrix Pulitzer
Matrix Pulitzer Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr...	Okay, trying to steer clear of the word "cute" Wanda, since it's been used... This was adorable. I too loved the part about him getting slapped every time in his dreams. That was way too funny! Loved it. Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.

Re: Poor Clark! or FDK: Mixed Signals #32172 08/29/06 05:15 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Most excellent!! Quote As soon as Lois Lane saw Superman, she was hooked. And I was burnt toast, left on the sidelines, kaput. Burnt toast? hehehe! very witty! Loved it!! Quote The second reason is, in my fantasies, whenever I dreamt about telling her, she always, always slaps me. Every single time. ROFL! I wonder why she'd do that... Gotta go read "he said she said" again, now. hehehe! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: Poor Clark! or FDK: Mixed Signals #32173 09/05/06 12:07 PM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 12 Michigan R Rcpeaches2 Blogger
Rcpeaches2 Blogger R Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 12 Michigan	I loved the line about her slapping him too! Very cute story!

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