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#37484 01/17/07 09:02 PM
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Great part, Sue.

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She watched the far-away figure of Clark below her, seeing him tip his head back and laugh along with Jim. What were they laughing about? Her melancholy deepened - how long had it been since she had seen Clark laugh like that? She missed his laugh. She missed him. Did she love him? She didn't even need to ask - she knew that she did. Her life would be so much simpler if she could just stop loving him.
"I wish I knew how to quit you!" L&C-style wink

I really loved the bit where she has this monologue going on, knowing that he's listening. It illustrates how special he is and how well she knows him.

I thought it was funny that Lois would gladly hike several miles in the wrong direction just to prove him wrong. That's so her.

And I'm glad they're starting to get things worked out.


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Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."
Lana: "The best ones always start that way."

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#37485 01/18/07 01:49 AM
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Kinda sweet and hopeful, but mostly sad... Sue, you've gotta fix this soon; you're killing me!

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#37486 01/18/07 02:01 AM
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Isn't it wonderful? This is my favourite part so far. smile

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#37487 01/18/07 02:16 AM
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Hee hee, I second that Yvonne. I told Sue that repeatedly.

That whole one-sided conversation by the lake totally got to me. I loved it.

Can't wait for a sneak at part 6, Sue.

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#37488 01/18/07 06:06 AM
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Poignant!


If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.

Waking a Miracle by Aria

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