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FDK: The Girl Next Door - 35/? #37600 01/20/07 04:47 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley OP Merriwether
OP MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	This... Quote He didn’t speak, but he tipped his forehead against hers for a brief second, then pulled back slightly. “I…” he said, and kissed her gently. Lifting his mouth from hers, he murmured, “…love…” and kissed her again, more firmly. Lifting his mouth a mere hairsbreadth from hers, he whispered, “…you,” his breath warm on her lips, and this time, she was more than ready for his kiss. turned my knees to water. Good thing I am sitting down. Great chapter, Janet. The beginning had all the waffiness and heat I was craving, and the rest of it had some really fascinating explanations for lots of things I had wondered about on occasion: clothes, lawsuits, internet! lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: The Girl Next Door - 35/? #37601 01/20/07 11:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part! Quote “Yeah, here it is…” He looked around at them, grinning. “And…” He paused dramatically. “There’s some new information. The ICAAN has created a whole new top level domain especially for him – for Superman - .sup. Cool, huh?” It was cool. “Wow.” Lois shot a grin at Clark. <Your very own top-level domain.> Instead of 'Cool' is better 'Kal-El'. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: The Girl Next Door - 35/? #37602 01/29/07 02:06 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 446 Indiana TicAndToc Beat Reporter
TicAndToc Beat Reporter Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 446 Indiana	Thank you for your comments! I appreciate your taking the time to let me know what you think. Elisabeth, I'm glad that section worked - I went over it and over it, and was afraid it would sound too contrived. Maria, I'm glad the whole ICAAN thing seemed plausible, too - again, I went over and over that section before I was happy with it. More coming up very shortly. 'Toc TicAndToc :o) ------ "I have six locks on my door all in a row. When I go out, I lock every other one. I figure no matter how long somebody stands there picking the locks, they are always locking three." -Elayne Boosler

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