This is really interesting, Vincent.
Superman has always been a slightly schizophrenic sort of superhero. And Clark Kent, honestly, has been not a few blades of lettuce short of a full sandwich, but has rather come equipped with an extra head of something, whether it is lettuce or not. It has sometimes been disquieting. Now you have taken Superman's split personality to its logical conclusion: now our favorite Kryptonian from Kansas really suffers from a full-fledged multiple personality syndrome.
Like Terry, I'm definitely interested in where you are taking this. Unlike Terry, I don't really like LnC stories that don't end well, particularly if they don't end well for Lois. Don't take that as a suggestion about what direction you should be taking this story, but take it, instead, as a very minor warning that you might, perhaps, sort of misplace me as a reader if, uh.... Ah, you get it.
I really like the premise of this. Like Terry, I appreciate the feeling of comedy and farce, but like Terry, I can see that this is really not funny at all. Will Clark and Superman be able to merge and become merely aspects of one and the same man, not two wildly different personalities somewhat unhappily inhabiting the same body? I would surely appreciate it if Lois would be able to help Clark and Superman become one man.
As I said, this is a hugely interesting premise!
Ann
