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FDK: Rebirth #40461 03/15/07 01:20 PM
Joined: Aug 2006 Posts: 795 EU Vanda Detroit OP Features Writer
OP Vanda Detroit Features Writer Joined: Aug 2006 Posts: 795 EU	Hi Cat, I guess your plan worked. More than the half story I was thinking it was Lois. But then Quote “C’mon, Honey. Come back, now.” Honey? This is the second season and Clark/Superman didn't say this to Lois when he freezed her... Quote “That’s it, Baby. Fight it. Breathe for me.” That's definitely another person. But who? Quote “Cl-“ Her voice was weak and hoarse, and her mouth was too weak to work out whatever word it had been trying to say. Clark? No, that couldn't be Clark. Quote “Miss Parker, may I introduce to you Mr. Clyde Barrow.” ahhhh, Hope you are going on with that story! Barb

Re: FDK: Rebirth #40462 03/15/07 02:08 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	That was great! Completely unexpected and very well written! Lisa lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: Rebirth #40463 03/16/07 02:13 AM
Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA DSDragon Top Banana
DSDragon Top Banana Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA	I was totally fooled until the last few paragraphs! Great job! "You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place

Re: FDK: Rebirth #40464 03/16/07 07:12 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Haha, you got me too. Well done! Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: Rebirth #40465 03/17/07 06:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 289 somewhere in the great white n... In4Adventure Hack from Nowheresville
In4Adventure Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 289 somewhere in the great white n...	It took me even longer to figure it out! LOL Because of the "Cl..." I was still thinking it was Lois in Ms. Parker's body. Wonderful, I too would like to see more, Natascha

Re: FDK: Rebirth #40466 03/17/07 03:59 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,006 Laura S Top Banana
Laura S Top Banana Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,006	Lol, you got me too. I still thought it was Lois until the last sentence. I even thought the honey and especially the "that's a girl" was odd for Clark to say, here I was being completely gullible. Hehe. But really good job! Comic aspect of fooling me completely aside, I loved the description you used. Worked perfectly. Laura Thanks to CapeFetish for the awesome icon.

Re: FDK: Rebirth #40467 03/21/07 03:28 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada SuperRoo Merriwether
SuperRoo Merriwether Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada	You had me fooled too! I was a little confused by the 'baby' and 'honey'. The killer was when she said "Cl"...of course I thought Clark, but man that was cleaver as she was really trying to say Clyde. Very awesome. Your descriptions/writing of emotions made it feel real and on the mark. What a sensory overload that was for Bonnie. WOW! I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.

Re: FDK: Rebirth #40468 08/28/07 02:52 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Even without the obvious humor, the descriptions you write are vivid and poignant. Her fear and confusion are captivating, as are her desire for breath and support. Well done, Catherine. Elisabeth

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