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**Note: Not leaving a chance of spelling that as Rigoletto, I copied and pasted the titles. BWAHA!**

*stomps on thems lousy crickets*

Woohoo! How I wish they'd gotten pizza instead. Of course, had they gotten pizza, they probably would have gotten the only one in all of Metorpolis outside of Suicide Slum with bad cheese. (Wait... isn't bad cheese an OXYMORON??)

I can't wait for the next bit! Poor Clark, I bet he won't be getting to sleep anytime soon

Ooooh, and did you find a site with all of those Lawyer Jokes, or do you just know a lot of them?

I thought at first this was a story to answer my challenge of "What if the almost first date went further?" but that's ok - I am getting what I wanted anyway.

As for the lawyer jokes - that is an awesome idea. Very spontaneous makes everything seem oh so more realistic somehow.

I read this and I seriously thought Clark would say: "The bedroom???" But no he didn't! He had an opening and he didn't go for it! Damn him!

Again, good of you to tie it to everything else that happened in the episode. Where did they get those writers from?

Stop torturing the poor boy, Lois. I bet your mind knew all along what that small bump was. Oh yes it did. Mind games....

This reminds me of my own boyfriend and I - he carries me everywhere and I read this and I just ..... meowr? *purrs in contentment*

But on the other hand the mental image of Clark standing there all night while Lois sleeps is such a funny one. More please more and soon!

The Little Tornado.

Wooooo! A new story from Sue. I have decided to be good from now on and try to give proper reviews again. I have been slacking. You guys write these nice stories that I enjoy so much and it takes you a while to get them written. The least I can do is spend 10 minutes giving something back.

Ohhh, nice one Lois! I would probably make them as well… I don’t hate Mayson but man did she ruin so many good moments.

Less hands more mole woman! Haha, I love your fascination with the hands though. *sigh* They are pretty nice.

Awww and he really could too! Makes it even sweeter.

Uh oh Clark… don’t let your hormones do the talking… think about what you might be revealing here…

Ouch… who knew it would be so easy for you to let your guard down? Lois should have jumped you in the first season and I bet you would have confessed to being Superman right away.

Tehehe! Oh he heard you Lois. I can only imagine how shocked and happy he is right about now. I can’t wait for more Sue!

Yay for pizza! I've always been of the opinion that Ralph and his pagoda had a whole lot to answer for.

Lovely, Sue. Sweet and sexy and WAFFY and full of promise. Can't wait for the next bit .

Caroline

At first I was a little surprised that you posted this story in the gfic folder. But there is really no reason to either wonder at or deplore a lack of nfic scenes in this fic. As you showed in your Proof series, you are a master at writing gfic stories that vibrate with a gossamer sensualism. You create a shivering eroticism as fragile as a butterfly's wing when you show us Lois and Clark treading those first, breathless steps of a dance that can only much later lead to full physical intimacy.

Ann

Wow, what Toc said so well, goes for me too. Unlike the others, I would love to see this go into the nfic folder. I can't help it. You write those love scenes so well. The kiss, made me want to find my husband. Too bad he is at work. Anyway. Lovely, can't wait for more. laura

Because of the title I thought it would be a Soul Mates fic!

I love Soul Mates rewrites, but even if The Risorgimento period is fundamental in Italian history, I don't know if I'd like a story taking place during this period... Lois and Clark as two young intellectuals writing a secret paper? Two revolutionaries during the Cinque Giornate?

I'm happy to see your story is a 'The Phoenix' rewrite! I love this episode and surely I'm going to read your fic!

Simona

Well, like others, my first thought is 1) Yea, another sue story, 2)where's the end of platonic and 3) and foremost...this is in the wrong folder!!

doublel

I loved it Sue! So sweet but so sensual! I love their kisses and caresses on the couch, but I love expecially Lois' thoughts at the end of this part; I always thought that after Clark' killer smile at the bedroom' door, Lois' thoughts would have been on him for a long time! After your fabulous scene, things are surely on the right course for them!

I like very much the dialogue about Luthor rebirth, and how Lois makes clearer her feelings about the whole situation, I always thought her words to him on the street were too... Lame? Light? Lacking? I can't find the right word in English, sometimes it's so frustrating!

I can't wait to read Clark thoughts, expecially after Lois' involuntary declaration of love!


Simona
who thinks that this is perfect as PG story, because hopefully there will be a Nfic sequel!

Oh Sue! That was so sweet and romantic! I love your stories, and your writing. I absolutely loved the way you described the kisses in that part, and all the lawyers jokes they keep telling, as if to lightening the sexual tension between them. So realistic, and so adorable.

I want more (and not only from that story - I check every day to see if you posted the last part of Platonic...)

Sue, this is so wonderful. Very sensual in a way that sends shivers down my spine. And I am continually in awe of your ability to weave that around wonderful conversation. When I read your fic, I always feel like I'm seeing L&C they way they really are. Then I remember they aren't real!

I put out a plea for lawyer jokes last month.

Huh? At what point did I say that she didn't have compassion for him? All Lois said was that it was weird to see Lex again and that it was creepy how he thought she was going to go running back to him. When your ex-fiance comes back from the dead (after you've found out he's a psychopath who deliberately took steps to control you and destroyed everything you held dear in the process) and now he's stalking you - well, let me know how that makes you feel.

Sorry - but I think the writers biffed it on this one - which is why they're not done talking about Lex yet. <g> Lois was right to placate him while she was there in the alley with him - who knows what he would have done if she's "betrayed" him? But who appointed her as judge and gave her the authority to pardon Lex's past crimes? How is being doomed to be lovesick over her a fair punishment for everything else he did? /me takes a few deep breaths and repeats to self "just a show, just a show".

Oh, and LT? Lois wasn't deliberately trying to seduce him with the knuckle noogie. When she's trying, I promise you'll know it.

Um, uh, get used to it? With the exception of the story I can't seem make myself finish, there's one other nfic that I've been working on since about October. After that, I doubt very much that I'll be writing any more nfic. I won't say "never" because who knows, but in my current state of mind, I just don't see it happening. Sorry guys.

LOL - Simona! I was a little worried that the Italian readers might think I'd gone off on a weird tangent. This has nothing to do with the Italian Risorgimento. I just liked the fancy word for "resurrection". I guess it's worth noting this won't have anything to do with that episode either. <heh>

Ha! Jojo! You know, and I know, and pretty much everyone knows that I love that freckle of his. But it would cross a weird line for me if I mentioned it in every story. I'm pacing myself. Besides, they both have so many nice features - it gives an author some leeway and range to work with.

Thanks, LT and Jojo, for picking out the "I'd fly you anywhere you wanted for a kiss on the cheek" line. That's the first bit of conversation that I wrote for this part. No matter what else got moved around or changed, THAT had to stay. I just love it when he flirts with her on two levels and she's absolutely clueless.

Thanks to everyone who's left comments. I appreciate them far more than you'd probably believe. I tell myself I write for the sheer joy of it, which is mostly true. But I only post for feedback.

Ahh! That was so wonderful! I feel all warm and fuzzy. Which is great, because at the moment a mountain of homework does not LOOK warm and fuzzy. I told myself when I saw this was posted that I'd read it AFTER the work, but then... well... I couldn't resist! And I'm so glad I did. Can't imagine what Clark's thinking right now.

Laura

^_~ I know you can't mention it in every story. I have to pick at you about it though.

This was so sweet. It had just the right amount of sexual tension for their first date and the right amount of silly behaviour on their part. I can't wait for the next part.

Okay, that was sweet, funny, romantic, and just plain perfect. And I'm going to plant a big flag and say, nfic? This don't need no stinkin' nfic! It has this blanket of Waffiness that you just want to wrap around yourself while you stupidly grin. Or okay, at least I want to.

JD

Oh, Sue, thank you! I'd seen the plea for lawyer jokes, which had me ROTFL, but you worked them in so well! And then the subtle, sensual, slow dance that you write so well. Wow.

Powerful stuff, Sue. Thank you!

mmouse

Oh, Sue...that was beautiful! I love the different turn that the story took...they did neck on the couch instead of Lois lamely getting up!

Now did Clark hear her?

Since you have said that this was 1/3, you are therefore finished with the story and will post again soon...right?

Hey,
I never intended to imply that you wrote Lois in such a way that she did not feel compassion for him and I give you marks for pointing out that it is creepy to have him stalk you but I just thought she would have explained more about how she felt about Luthor at that point in the conversation - more than just what it felt now that he was back. But perhaps you are right not to write that in. The stalking by the ex fiancee and him being psychopathic aside, if Lois did realise and understand how he felt about her or why, I don't think it would be something she would ever share with Clark. I think Clark will always see Lex as incapable of love somehow - which perhaps is a weak point for CK but nevertheless. Maybe I'll write a story and explain it better somehow. Plus, remember, I have not seen Season 3 & 4 though I have a generic idea of what happens in them. I have seen just the Ultrawoman episode out of season three. I never watched the show when it was on air in SL - I had dancing classes.

You write so well - I don't care if it is g rated - you make me want to see the n rated version.

Like I said, I don't know why I like the flirting but that line: "I'd fly you anywhere for a kiss on the cheek." Maybe it is the fact that it works on two levels. Maybe it is the fact that it portrays his naughty cheeky side. I cannot resist naughty cheeky men. *sigh*

Anyways don't be too mad at me for disagreeing with you over Lex. I am still waiting for parts 2 and 3 and you are still a great writer.

The Little Tornado.

Oh, my. This is wonderful stuff, Sue. And the teasing back and forth while they both fought to stay in control made me feel all sorts of wonderful WAFFs. Oh, yeah. He heard her alright. Now, what is he going to do about it?

Please come back with part 2 soon,
BJ