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Well, since I called this thread "Best Revelation Scene Ever", let's cut straight to the chase:

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Ignoring his reluctance, she threw open a closet and pulled out a pair of Clark's jeans and his favourite T-shirt, and then grabbed a spare pair of glasses from a drawer. “Put these on.”

“What?”

“Superman, you said you'd do anything for me. This is what I'm asking you.”

He hesitated, then took the pile of clothing from her. He disappeared into the bathroom, returning mere seconds later dressed in what she'd given him. She frowned, then reached out and finger-combed his hair into place, then drew him over to the bedroom mirror.

He stared at his reflection with an expression of disbelief. Clark Kent looked back at him.
Superman, you are Clark Kent! Look, you really are!!! goofy

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“All's well that ends well.” He smiled, then bent to brush his lips over hers. “For the other Lois and Clark, too. I'm glad about that.”

“Me too. I'd hate for any Lois not to have her Clark. You're pretty indispensable to us, you know that?”

“Ditto.” He kissed her again. And, seconds later, she'd completely forgotten what they were talking about.
Aaawww!!! sloppy sloppy sloppy

Hope you're okay with my wild cosmological speculations, Wendy. I'm an astronomy buff, after all. This story was a wild and fun ride, and very sweet and WAFFy in the end!

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This was great! What a way to wrap up Tank's challenge. I have to agree about this being the best revelation ever. Not only did Lois find out--so did Clark! LOL.


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yeah gods, Wendy, you're good! sloppy

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Wendy! I love that you were promted to write a response to TANKS evil fic. I've missed you and your wonderful muse in this forum. Thanks for the great ride. Laura


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Wow, that was quite an ending! And brilliant, I must say. I was so confused when I read Tank's beginning, but you wrapped it up wonderfully! And I too loved the fact that CLARK found out as well as Lois during the revelation scene. clap That was inspired, lol. Thanks for posting such a wonderful ending.

Laura


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Wendy, I loved what you did with this. Won't you consider coming back from Dr Who? grovel


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This was an excellant fic from start to finish. Tank did an incredable job of setting this up. Of course, I've read too many of these to think you'd be backed into a corner. You handled the whole idea with grace.

I liked the first revelation scene, as well. Imagine finding out your husband is Superman--particularly after inviting him for dinner last week.

Nicely done.

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*clap clap clap* bravo wendy! thaT was amazing. nice idea's! and im so glad alt-lois got her clark back! jump


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