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FDK: Remember When It Rained Part 7/8 #43998 06/27/07 05:25 AM
Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 748 The Netherlands Mrs. McLeod OP Columnist
OP Mrs. McLeod Columnist Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 748 The Netherlands	jippie the next part!! Quote One part that is one big scene of waffiness. Yay...? I definitely think that's a Yay!! Quote If she didn’t wake up soon on her own, he was going to do it for her, dangerous or not… He was still a little confused on that matter anyway. and him and Cat, come on Lois you should of known better than that. I always liked how she reacted in that episode And you made her react really sweet too and the cuddling, aaaww! I'm glad there's still another part 'cause I'm really enjoying this story!! "I have no regrets. If you regret things, then you're sort of stepping backwards. I'm a believer in going forwards." ~Kate Winslet

Re: FDK: Remember When It Rained Part 7/8 #43999 06/27/07 07:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Awwwww, I am a gooey puddle. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Remember When It Rained Part 7/8 #44000 06/27/07 07:23 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	That's a lovely part, Anna. I was particularly moved at how Clark was debating with himself whether or not he should try to bring Lois out of that dream she was having. Knowing that it was in fact a "bringing-someone-back-from-the-brink-of-death" dream made it awesome. Quote Just then, Lois gripped his hand tightly. Somewhat startled, Clark nonetheless gripped right back, being careful not to exert his full strength or anything even close to it upon the woman lying in the bed. He did however apply a gentle pressure, letting her know that he was there through touch. Lois appeared to relax at a little at this contact, but her hand still held his with a grip that rivalled Superman himself. Clark was just glad he was able to comfort her a little as she dreamed whatever it was she was dreaming. I love this. Lois holds Clark's hand as if her life depends on it... and perhaps it does. Quote “Clark…” she said slowly, none of the whimper left in her voice. Her tongue flicked out to lick her lips slowly. “I was thinking…when I was in that box…” “Sarcophagus,” Clark corrected without thinking. “It was a sarcophagus.” “Really?” Lois wrinkled her nose and frowned. “You mean they put me in a fancy decorated box where a dead guy once was? A dead guy who probably had his brains pulled out through his nose?” I knew it was a sarcophagus! And talking about pulling a mummy's brain out through his nose is so yucky, and so Lois! Quote “As I was saying…when I was in that box, I was thinking about you and me and this past week…” Lois paused, chewing on her bottom lip before continuing. “And I came to the conclusion that we'd wasted a lot of time; that I'd wasted that time. And so I decided when you woke me that I-I didn't want to waste anymore of our lives. Who knows how long we really have left? Another stupid villain could succeed in murdering me tomorrow – they certainly got close yesterday. And so many of them know about Kryptonite now…you're going to keep encountering it again and again.” Lois sighed. “I guess what I'm trying to say is this: yes, Clark. I should have said it before but I was an idiot. So, yes.” Ah, this is adorable. Lois is babbling - really, really babbling - and she isn't being too clear and concise about what she really means, is she? Quote “Yes?” Clark's mind whirled back over the past week or two, suddenly stopping dead upon one incident – one night – in particular. His eyes grew wide, tears of hope nearly overflowing from his eyes. He reached up a hand to cup her cheek. “You… Yes?” A complete sentence did not appear to be possible at this point in time. Lois just nodded, her eyes brimmed with teardrops of her own. She smiled warmly up at him. “With all my heart.” It was all that Clark could do to stop himself from leaping to his feet and jumping up and down in complete glee-filled abandon. Better yet, zooming around the room and yelling at the top of his voice, “She said yes! She said yes!” He only just managed to restrain himself, settling instead for pulling Lois into a enthusiastic embrace and whispering in her ear, “You just made me the happiest man on earth.” But Clark figured out what she meant. Aaawww. I loved their cuddling and making out, and was a little disappointed when it ended... not that I expected it to get all that far, honestly... and I loved that he told her - well, sort of told her - that he was a virgin. And they agreed to wait with that until they were married. So, um, Lois and Clark, why don't you get married now? How about next chapter? Looking forward to the final part of this, Anna! Ann

Re: FDK: Remember When It Rained Part 7/8 #44001 06/27/07 03:15 PM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	Anna, I'm so glad you posted! I'm glad that this story is still alive. I am loving it and cannot wait until the next post. I'm glad that Lois stopped playing games and finally let Clark in where he belongs. Gotta go! ~Sheila I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: FDK: Remember When It Rained Part 7/8 #44002 06/27/07 05:35 PM
Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 346 Christchurch, New Zealand princessanna Beat Reporter
princessanna Beat Reporter Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 346 Christchurch, New Zealand	Yay! Feedback! (man, my fingers are cold...this feedback of feedback may be short!) Quote So, um, Lois and Clark, why don't you get married now? Ahh, Ann... I ask the same question daily. Why not now? Well, maybe they will. Lois said (and I quote): Quote “Clark, can we get married soon?” So you see, she's thinking the same thing also... Clark answered in the affirmative too. Quote I loved their cuddling and making out, and was a little disappointed when it ended... not that I expected it to get all that far, honestly... Aww, Ann, I'm glad you liked their cuddling and making out. It was honestly the hardest part for me to write - it took me the longest chunk of time. I was so worried about it sounding...wrong. I'm also glad you didn't expect it to get that far - PG fic after all... Quote I knew it was a sarcophagus! And talking about pulling a mummy's brain out through his nose is so yucky, and so Lois! Everyone was speculating about it being a sarcophagus and I knew it was of course, so I thought I'd throw it in there and use some of my primary school knowledge to make it more interesting... I'll always remember learning about the Egyptians mummifying people and how they pulled their brains out through their nose first... Quote I am loving it and cannot wait until the next post. Yay, Sheila! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Next post will contain a lot more A-plot (as in investigation etc). Maybe not so much waffiness, though I'll try and slip a little bit in there... Quote Awwwww, I am a gooey puddle. I'm currently picturing you from your picture in a gooey puddle, Laura! I'm so happy this part made you go 'awwww'! Quote I'm glad there's still another part 'cause I'm really enjoying this story!! Hmm...you're all enjoying it... I've been wondering about a sequel... Whatcha think? I have a vignette in mind right now, so we'll see... Thank you all for your wonderful feedback! I love reading what you think of it all. ~Anna. Lois: Jimmy, give me back my dress. Clark: Now there's something you don't hear around the newsroom everyday.

Re: FDK: Remember When It Rained Part 7/8 #44003 07/16/07 08:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 251 Germany lcfan4ever Hack from Nowheresville
lcfan4ever Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 251 Germany	Ok, why I missed this story is beyond me , but I'm glad that I've found it in the end . This whole chapter is sooooo sweet that I wished it would have been at least twice as long (or even much longer ) /me happily sigh while rushing of to chapter 8a "Superman is what I can do. Clark is who I am."

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