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Delightful.

But No haircut? Anywhere?

Now that's the kind of Tank ending that I like! Great job! I really enjoyed it.

Tank! You old softie.

I loved it! Thanks for a riveting story that had me on the edge of my seat and for a waffy ending that left me sitting there going "awwwww".

Poor Barry. <g>

And poor Lois's nose - as to why she didn't need to get a haircut... well, this was season 4 Lois and she already had a haircut... although I suppose you could have gone shorter - or completely bald. LOL!

Thanks for sharing, Tank.

-- DJ

Very nice short, Tank. Intense and attention-grabbing without being maudlin or overly sentimental. It was entirely appropriate that Lois figure out that Luthor hadn't killed Clark and let herself be used as bait. Naturally, this means that Henderson now knows about Clark - assuming the very intelligent inspector didn't already know.

Of course, the intensity and passion of their reunion will probably set in motion the events which will produce Utopia, the society built by Clark and Lois's descendants. After all, who's going to remember birth control at a time like this?

Aww Tank. You're getting soft in your old age. Loved it!

~Sheila

Lovely, Tank! I have to confess, I was so worried that you'd give us a Tank ending that I decided not to read your story until I could judge from the comments on part two whether it was safe to do so... (Although for some reason I can't get angry at you, not even when you write your Tank endings. I don't want to read them, thank you very much, but I can't get angry at you. Maybe that's because I can always sense, in all your stories, how much you really like Lois? )

So this is a story where you gave us your very best heroic, slightly comic book-y Lois. Yay! Nobody writes her like Tank. Loved the whole scenario where Lois, bound to a chair, slightly contemptuously explains to Lex Luthor how she has in fact defeated him. Almost as if she had been a seemingly overpowered Sherlock Holmes, haughtily explaining her victory to her dense (and evil) jailer, Dr. Watson: Elementary, my dear Watson!

And I looooved the ending. So WAFFy. Yes, Tank, when you are not busy writing evil Tank endings, you really are a softie at heart!

Ann

Very nice, Tank. You had me slightly worried with part 1; but glad to see we can still count on you to provide a great story!!

Jo

Brilliant, as always, Tank. I liked how she had to investigate, even in her grief.

I must confess, though, that I liked take one better. Sassy Lois rules!

Elisabeth
(Although I can imagine you feeling a little like Clark when I say that. "Lois likes Superman better than she likes me." <Sigh> or "Mayson likes Clark and hates Superman." <Sigh> Forgetting that comparing yourself to yourself you always end up winning.)

Been away for a few days so I'm late coming back and thanking everyone for their comments.

Yes, Lois didn't need a haircut because this is a married Lois, so she's already seen the light.

I've always liked my Lois with a little of the comic book characterization in her. There she is even more independant and physically able to fend for herself. She has learned not only hand to hand combat but has gone through SCU training.

Thanks again for the kind words.

Tank (who wonders what a 'Tank ending' is?)