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Brutal, huh? And right! (but pompous)

Right, I'm off to find some more mistakes! Back later... be afraid...

...found an 'in' that should be an 'it'

and a missing 's...

Ok, enough constructive 'bullying'. Nice set up. I'm interested to see where this goes. Under the table at a Chinese restaurant perhaps?

Good for you for posting your story here. You're a braver FoLC than me. Or should that be 'I'. :rolleyes:

Keep writing.

Aw, I like this one. Lois is so mean. :p I can't wait to see her turn three shades of red when she realizes that was Penny. Maybe once Lois realizes how sweet Penny is, she'll take the young intern under her wing.

Wait, who am I kidding? This is Lois Lane we're talking about.

Thanks guys!

I went back and fixed the mistakes you noticed, and have a rough outline of part 2, but it will be a while before I write it out.

I wonder, is it a coincidence, that the new intern's name is Penny?

It's been a while since I watched AKA Superman, but this is a different Penny from the one in AKA Superman, right?

Michael

Um ... yes. I thought that name sounded familiar when I typed it, but I didn't think to check. ~Guess thats why I should have a beta.

Working on part two, will post soon