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The Letter - FDK #50231 03/06/08 01:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat OP Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	You know, I like this microfiction idea. Fanfic I can find time to read. This was a sweet and poignant little snapshot of life after Lois, smileyd. I especially liked the language you used in the first paragraph. Very emotive. You did an excellent job of capturing Clark's point of view and feelings in a small amount of words. Nicely done! LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: The Letter - FDK #50232 03/06/08 09:36 AM
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kmar Columnist Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 516 Maryland	Beautiful vignette. For such a short story it carried a large emotional wallop. Well written and well done.

Re: The Letter - FDK #50233 03/07/08 04:36 PM
Joined: Oct 2007 Posts: 242 Nova Scotia, Canada smileyd Hack from Nowheresville
smileyd Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Oct 2007 Posts: 242 Nova Scotia, Canada	Thank you both! Don't think about the pink elephant... I dare you! Thanks to Tineke for the avatar

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