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#50356 03/11/08 04:53 AM
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Nice Carol. goofy


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This was great!

But I think Lois and Clark need to have a bit of a talk. Clark still thinks that she only sees him for his powers, and that's going to backfire if confesses the "I'm falling in love with you" thing first.

I loved the twist on the conversation between the Kents and Clark. In fact, I have to say I found in even funnier than the one in the show. Maybe it just seems so much more crazy from Jonathan and Martha's perspective.

I'm looking forward to more!

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Such a nice surprise... Lois knows and Clark immediately knows she knows... ofcourse.. they still have to talk now.. looking fwd to next part!

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Yay! I also love that Lois' didn't go ballistic on Clark. I'm looking forward to how this will end. *crosses fingers* please let there be some making out... or more. evil

Great job Carol!!


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#50360 03/11/08 07:46 AM
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Just adorable! More soon. Laura


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laugh I love it when Lois doesn't go completely nutso and takes the revelation so well. YAY!

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"I almost woke you up to yell at you, but I know you're not supposed to wake up someone who's sleepwalking." She shrugged. "I wasn't sure about sleep levitating."
hehehe! smile *excellent*!

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Superman had to p... relieve himself.
Damn you! I had just taken a sip from my coffee when I read that! ....it came right out my nose!!!! (and I wish I was kidding!)

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She'd fallen asleep last night contemplating a relationship with Clark. Was that still something she wanted?
Heee! I sure hope so!! smile

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But a relationship was more than just arms and a chest and a great six-pack.
Yes, but... I mean, arms like that you can't get anywhere else. *lol* ...I'm sorry, I had to! hehehe!

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"The shutters are lead lined. I can't see what's going on."

"That's odd. What about the walls? Are they lead lined?"
Ahhh! WTG, Carol!! Finally someone had him think to look elsewhere. (does lead keep him from hearing, though, I wonder?)

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Lois smiled shyly at him. "No." She grew bolder and winked at him. "I am going to send you for take out later though."

Clark laughed. "Just name the country."
OMG, that is SO cute!! ...totally makes me want one like him. (cause, heh... even Batman's not able to do THAT!)

This story is so much fun!! Come back quick with the next part! laugh


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Thought I'd pause for a moment before I tuck the kids in to say how much I enjoyed this.

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BTW, a blue arrow would be nice

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Will say more later, but thanks all smile .

Little blue arrow added...

What can I say? It was like 1am...
Carol

Edit: so it was 11:20 - it felt like 1am... wink

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This was great! I loved Lois' calm reaction to Clark when he woke up. And the realization that she was falling in love with him was really well written.

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At least now she knew why he could eat all that junk food. Flying probably burned a lot of calories. Walking through fires probably did too.
I loved this line!

Great part. I'm looking forward to the next one!


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More Please!

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I think my line of choice is this one:

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Superman had to p... relieve himself.
It was the perfect transition. I like that she didn't flip, but I still think Lois was extremely calm - especially with the whole 'fallen in love' revelation. Those are two big revelations!

Martha and Jonathan were hilarious. They had a pretty big revelation of their own!

Anyway, loved the part - and the continuously growing total part count (i.e. 2/3 or 4) is exciting wink

Thanks for sharing,
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I really like this, too! It was really funny when Martha and Jonathan thougt that Clark and Lois were married... and decided to do a little celebrating of their own!!! clap sloppy

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Carol, I just loved it! So many people commented that they were glad that Lois did not go ballistic with the revelation but we have to remember that this was early first season and Lois and Clark had not been friends that long. So he was not at the point of sacrilege yet.


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"Anything happen last night?" he asked, avoiding the topic he knew was sure to come up.

"Depends on what you're talking about."

"Across the street."

He could almost see her shrug. "I haven't checked yet."

"What about here?" He raised his eyes to meet hers, certain she would see his fear and trepidation written in them.

"It was..." she paused for a moment, "...enlightening."

He chuckled softly. "Somehow, I think that's probably the understatement of the year."

She smiled at him. "Probably."

"Are you mad?"

She shook her head. "No."

"You're not?"

"I was, but I'm not anymore."

"Oh."
Poor Clark. He doesn't know where to start. His biggest concern is if Lois is mad at him or not. And as I've said before, it's too early in the game for Lois to be too upset with him.
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She'd fallen asleep last night contemplating a relationship with Clark. Was that still something she wanted?

Before she'd realized he was Superman, she'd been reveling in the feeling of safety in his arms. Thinking about how she would like to wake up like that every morning and how well she would sleep every night.

She'd been getting ready to admit to herself that she was falling madly, desperately, completely, hopelessly in love with Clark Kent.

Where had that thought come from? Had she really been ready to admit that she was falling in love with Clark?
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Deep down, she knew it was true. She was falling in love with Clark Kent. The pheromone thing had opened her eyes to her physical attraction to him and the kiss yesterday had further confirmed that. And the way he'd reacted to her when she was throwing herself at him... her first thought had been that he hadn't been attracted to her, but then she'd remembered the next morning, as she was fighting off the 'hangover' that came after the pheromone had worn off. Something along the lines of 'Take me, I'm yours'. So, yeah, he was attracted to her too.

He was definitely good looking. She'd realized that from the first moment she'd stopped to take time to look at him the day after they'd first met. *She* of course was immune to a pretty face, or so she'd thought. But Clark was so much more than just a pretty face. He was kind and generous and compassionate and had a body to die for.
I think that Lois should tread lightly when she tells Clark of her feelings. She has obviously harbored feelings for Clark and him holding her while they slept just confirmed her feelings. But he is probably going to think that the Superman revelation had something to do with it.
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But there was so much more to him than a great body.

He was smart – smarter than she was many times, and that was something that pained her to admit more than she would ever let on. He was gentle. He was the last true Boy Scout and his powers had nothing to do with that. He would be the same caring Clark whether he was born on Krypton or in Kansas.

And that was what it all really boiled down to. She loved him. Powers or not, she loved him.

"Lois?"

His voice interrupted her musings.

She looked up to see that he was sitting back down on the bed. He had pulled a T-shirt on and one part of her mind noted that it made his arms look incredible.

But a relationship was more than just arms and a chest and a great six-pack.
Girl get a hold of yourself! Lois has it for Clark...bad!
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"At least it didn't take us all night to figure out that this big stack of stuff is nothing." She looked at him. "And that was pretty impressive. You could come in handy, you know."

Clark's face became serious. "There's more to me than superpowers, you know."

She nodded. "I know.
Clark is wanting Lois to know that there is more to him than Superpowers and sort of asking her to please "really look at him."
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"Lois and you? Is that... does everyone know?"

Clark was still lost in thought as he answered. "Oh sure, Mom. No problem. We're registered as husband and wife."

Jonathan and Martha shared a stunned look, but Jonathan was the one to voice the question. "Clark, is there anything... you'd like to tell us?"

"Not really. Things are going pretty smoothly, assuming Lois keeps her end of the bargain and lets me go first tonight." Clark didn't really care about their bathroom arrangements, but he wouldn't let Lois know that.

Jonathan and Martha nearly dropped their phones.

"I... that would be... I'm sure she will, Clark," Jonathan managed to croak out. "But, um, Clark... a gentleman always lets a lady go first."
I've always wondered about that conversation. I wondered if Jonathan and Martha actually knew what was going on and just pulling Clark's leg or did they really suspect that something had happened between the two of them. That phone conversation left lots of holes for inferences.

Again...loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Now if you would just produce the next part!

~Sheila


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Thank you again guys. This afternoon just go really rough and I appreciate the comments more than you know.

Sheila - there is a line in the script that was cut from the ep [I discovered it while 'researching']. After they hang up, Jonathan says he wonders why they weren't invited to the ceremony leading me to believe they thought there really had been a wedding. And in the phone conversation he has with them later, Clark says he's sorry for misleading them or the misunderstanding or something like that.

Thanks again guys smile .
Carol


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