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FDK: Lunch Break #51435 04/21/08 06:27 AM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700 Beth S. OP Columnist
OP Beth S. Columnist Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700	gr8 this was fantastic! I loved all the little humorous tangents in this story. I have to say that I kind of like graffiti, as long as it's no too obscene. And what a great twist! You know, now that you've posted this story, I'm allowed to bug you for more.

Re: FDK: Lunch Break #51436 04/21/08 08:27 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 184 UK Helga Hack from Nowheresville
Helga Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 184 UK	I know exactly where you were sitting Console yourself that it was nice enough to sit outside. Have you ever had to sit in the waiting rooms at Euston? Those are horrible, even if they are pigeon free. This was fun, and the twist was amusing. Thank you! Helga Knowledge is knowing that tomatoes are a fruit. Intelligence is not putting them in a fruit salad.

Re: FDK: Lunch Break #51437 04/21/08 07:50 PM
Joined: Sep 2007 Posts: 177 London CheeseoftheMonth Hack from Nowheresville
CheeseoftheMonth Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Sep 2007 Posts: 177 London	Cute little story. And I have to say I didn't see that ending coming. The key to change... is to let go of fear - Rosanne Cash

Re: FDK: Lunch Break #51438 04/21/08 08:58 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 516 Maryland kmar Columnist
kmar Columnist Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 516 Maryland	Cute little story with all its little tangents. Didn't see that ending coming. Made me let out with a little chuckle.

Re: FDK: Lunch Break #51439 04/22/08 08:59 PM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 5 England gr8shadesofElvis Top Banana
gr8shadesofElvis Top Banana Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 5 England	Thanks for the comments everyone. Maybe some day I'll work my way up to something resembling a proper multi-part fanfic... When Life Gives You Green Velvet Curtains, Make a Green Velvet Dress.

Re: FDK: Lunch Break #51440 04/27/08 02:21 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Such a strange little ficlet. An overview of life from the ramblings of an insider. Normally, boredom begats boredom, but this time I liked it. It had a nice punch line. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: Lunch Break #51441 10/21/10 03:20 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana HappyGirl Top Banana
HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	Just caught this on the archive. It was a fun slice of life, and I think you should get bonus points for using the word 'ornithority' in a sentence. Happy This is my happily ever after.

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