Hello, everyone. I'm so glad that you have all given me feedback!
I guess starting your own FDK thread really works, doesn't it?
I'm going to be going with a twice a week posting scheldue for now. Look for part two on Wed. This may change, however, depending on how much buffer I have. I'll let you know.
Fauve - Well, I guess whether you need chocolate depends on the person. But when I was writing this, I certainly noticed I was getting cravings, and my beta mentioned it after chapter one as well. So I thought I should let people know just in case.
Interesting to know your relationship with your father. It actually surprised me how well I seemed to be writing Clark's relationship with Kiley, because I don't have a close relationship with my father. Not that he's a bad person or anything, but I didn't grow up with him and have a hard time relating to him. Whatever. Discresion.
Kiley's relationship with her father and vice versa, will become very important later on. You'll see why soon.
Anonip - We'll I can't take all the credit for the idea of Clark being helped with what he sees as Superman by writing. I believe I read it in on of Meredith Knight's stories first. But it works well here, as does Kiley's painting.
Interesting about the EIC change.
And as for Kiley and Larry's relationship - we'll see.
Carol - I'm glad to have you. Hopefully I can live up to your expectations.
Michael - Interesting observations. This does start out very WAFFY, yes. And there are many WAFFY moments in it. But it's going to get very Angsty as well, later. And that's all I can say.
As for Alice - she's very much a secondary character in this story. I see her as a lot more like Lois than the other two children. -
She's a perfectionist, she doesn't like quiet, and she's not very patient. But she's also a typical seventeen-year-old girl who's not sure what she wants in life yet.
However, I have considered writing sequels which feature Thomas and Alice, respectfully. Depends on how this story goes.
Thanks again.
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