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FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56116 10/19/08 03:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael OP Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Quote “Okay,” Mayson sighed and shot Lois another angry glance. Her eyes were gleaming dangerously and suddenly she started to smile, sure of her victory. “I just came to ask you, if you’d like to spend the weekend with me. I’ve got a cabin in the mountains. It’s cold there, but there’s a fire-place and...” her voice trailed off, leaving the rest to imagination. Lois heart missed a beat. This sly....! She couldn’t think of any swearword that would have even come close to describing Mayson. That woman was set on winning Clark over and Lois was beginning to fear that she would be successful. Honestly, Clark couldn’t but happily accept Mayson’s offer. Any man would rather want a caring woman who smiled at him, worshipping him for everyone to see. Why would he choose the snarling fury that lashed out at him and wouldn’t even give him a chance to explain anything? There wasn’t actually a choice, was there? No, I guess there isn’t. What a sweet and spunky ending, Barbara. The stand-off between Lois and Mayson sort of reminded me of the high noon dueling scenes in a western. Is it wrong to enjoy a good Lois&[insert female LnC character] cat-fight? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56117 10/19/08 04:54 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	I, too, could see Lois and Mayson exchange stares of venom! I mean, I could see them shoot daggers from their eyes!!! If looks could kill...!!!! Well, Clark certainly chose Lois over Mayson. Good for him!!!! And Lois finally told him that she loved him. And she did it before Dan Scardino invited her to Paris!!! Wheeeee!!!! Ann

Re: FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56118 10/19/08 09:04 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida cp33 Columnist
cp33 Columnist Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida	It might have started as a Nightmare for Lois and Clark but the ending seemed like a dream comme true. It was a wonderful story. Lois and Mayson like wet, hissing cats, poor Clark

Re: FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56119 10/20/08 03:42 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921 A anonpip Features Writer
anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	I loved the addition of Mayson at the end. Way to make things complicated! And it was a great way to get Lois to learn what had really happened with Clark without her having to back down. Great story, Barbara!

Re: FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56120 10/20/08 04:44 PM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	Very nicely done! What a sweet story. I've enjoyed every word. ~Sheila I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56121 10/21/08 06:58 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	A very enjoyable read. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56122 10/21/08 07:50 AM
Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland sueKay87 Freelance Reporter
sueKay87 Freelance Reporter Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland	Lovely story! Poor Clark! Lois and Clark Icons: http://suekay.creativist.me/lois-and-clark.html http://suekay.creativist.me/teri-hatcher.html Photography: http://skdailey.portfolik.com/ Fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/548649/sueKay-04

Re: FDK: Nightmares 4/4 #56123 10/22/08 03:25 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,636 Likes: 44 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,636 Likes: 44 Germany	Wow, so many replies. Thanks a lot. It's great to read that you liked my story. I thought that Mayson would be to much when my German beta kind of suggested to include her as well. Much to her and my pleasure, she fitted in. I'm glad that you think so, too. It's never too dark to be cool.

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