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Very cute, =) I must say its kinda nice to read these events as one continuous story instead of in pieces spread through a larger stories.
Sara "Lieta"
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Oh, I'm so conflicted! On the one hand, I smell danger in their relationship, which makes me worry, especially since I like Chad's character. On the other hand, I firmly believe Lois & Clark belong together, so this all has to happen.
Oh, boy...
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Thank you both for the feedback!
Sara - Interestingly, this is how they were written and even how they were BRed. I wanted to make sure that while they are a bit jumpy, they do tell a story before putting them into Triangle. The rest of this is less jumpy as well, but since I saw the first two chapters as a prologue, I decided I didn't need to add more things to make the scenes fit together.
soapheiress - It is a conundrum, isn't it? I've vacillated back and forth a lot on where this story is going (I know now, but in its infancy) and largely because I was struggling with the same thing you mention. I love Lois and Chad together, but ultimately, I like stories where Lois and Clark are together. And since I'm not okay with Lois two-timing them, I had to choose one. It was a hard choice, I'll tell you.
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I read it and liked it. Chad is very sweet, and I like reading about Lois being in love with a nice boy when she is so young. I don't know if I'm looking forward to their breaking up, however... but of course, I too want Lois and Clark to get together, and that means Chad has to get out of the way somehow....
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Thanks, Ann! You made me laugh, though. You sounded a bit "mob" like. "Chad has to get out of the way."  Are you sure he has to go away? I like Chad. 
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Sweet. And since you didn't include the bit where they decided to wait I was actually not sure if the last bit might not differ from Triangle... And now it's on to the new stuff. Well. Tomorrow. And then I will have to make sure to not catch up on the remaining 8-9 parts in once go. Otherwise I would be in BIG trouble  So this better not be in any way cliffhangerish, addictive or good, or who am I kiddin' here. *sigh* Michael
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Oh, yeah! I didn't manage to get on boards all weekend, and then I come back to find a host of feedback. Thanks, Michael. Am I reading this right? Are you saying that you hope this story isn't that good? In that case, I have to say, I hope to disappoint you.
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Yeah you did. And I really hoped so, too  Michael
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