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Feedback - Reflections Part 6 #57623 11/29/08 04:09 AM
Joined: Nov 2008 Posts: 64 USA M maxkeegan OP Freelance Reporter
OP maxkeegan Freelance Reporter M Joined: Nov 2008 Posts: 64 USA	Any feedback can be placed here. Four more parts after this, and the new stuff is coming out. However, parts 7 - 10 have gone through extensive rewrites. (hopefully for the better). Oh, and happy Thanksgiving everyone. If you're not in the U.S., then Happy Saturday! Max

Re: Feedback - Reflections Part 6 #57624 11/29/08 06:45 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326 R robinson Beat Reporter
robinson Beat Reporter R Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326	Great part! I like how you took and slightly changed the original story line. It works very well. Clark comes across as a lot more confident. 'Clark saw her turn and look at him with a curious expression. He had been right this morning, without the rain parka on, she was indeed a beautiful woman. Not only that, she seemed to radiate this raw energy, just like... well, he wasn't going to think about that.' I love this part - Clark notices Lois but does not want to. It will be interesting to see how he wrestles with this is future chapters robinson

Re: Feedback - Reflections Part 6 #57625 11/29/08 10:30 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 777 floor 13 S SJH Features Writer
SJH Features Writer S Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 777 floor 13	Soo, Cat and LoLo are friends? kinda? This should be fun. Liked the cab ride and Lois taking a second look to pull her own coat.Good stuff. "I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher "Fun will now commence" 7of9

Re: Feedback - Reflections Part 6 #57626 11/30/08 03:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Great story. Keep it coming. Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: Feedback - Reflections Part 6 #57627 12/05/08 06:50 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Nice And what's with Cat and Lois being friends That's so funny Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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