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Ok, I didn't see Clark as Tempus coming...I liked it.

And I realize that I asked for alot of a-plot devices, and you handled them well.

Love the name for Becca. and I loved how you teased the child about who she was. Our three year old would have done the same thing while our 6 year old would have had a fit after the second try.

Though I am curious. I didn't want Andrus because he was such a LAME character. or is he that scary?

Thank you RKN! thumbsup hyper


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Way cute! I love how Clark goes through the process of trying to figure out what his daughter is dressed up as. That's the problem with being a creative kid.


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I'm glad you liked it.

No, Andrus isn't scary. I was trying to create the idea that Andrus was sort of a long-running joke between Lois and Clark because he is such a ridiculous character.


thanks!

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“I dressed up as the scariest person I know of. Well, second scariest. The scariest would be-”
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‘Come to Papa’ Tempus
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What a sweet and waffy story, rkn smile

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Clark was adorable with their daughter. That was such a sweet little story.

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loved it!

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Awww... This was so sweet, and I loved the banter between Clark and Becca. It was so cute with Clark teasing her and she thinking he was serious.


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aww! how cute. And a bunny!!! there was a bunny! *giggles* laugh

Nice work!


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