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First thing!! Change your indicator to a blue arrow. I almost missed the story!! wink


Hey, Darcy. Good to see you around here.


What were Carol’s requests and things she didn’t want in the stories. I think those are fun.


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*The woman must live on Energizer batteries,* Lois thought. *She just keeps going, and going . . .*
Man, I wish I had her energy!


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Movements out of the corner of her eye made Lois turn her head. Clark was walking toward her. *He'd better not do what I think he's going to do,* Lois thought to herself in vain. Clark grabbed the potato dish from her nerveless fingers, gently set it on the table just to her right, and--quick and soft--put his lips on hers.
Awww....

Sweet story, Darcy.


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Gah! I always forget about the blue arrow. I'll change it in a sec. Here were CarolM's requirements:

Three things I want in my fic:
1. Lois and Clark smoochies [even if they aren't real [a la HiM etc]]
2. A revelation or unexpected gift
3. Smallville and/or Martha/Jonathan

Preferred season(s)/holiday [if applicable]: 1-2

Three things I do not want in my fic:
1. Assorted other love interests [Luthor, Scardino, Drake, Deter, etc] unless it's to kick them to the curb
2. New Kryptonians [blech]
3. Amnesia and/or clones


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Loved the comparision between Martha and the Energizer Bunny. Too Funny.

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*The woman must live on Energizer batteries,* Lois thought. *She just keeps going, and going . . .*
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Thinking it would be rude to compare her hostess to the Energizer Bunny out loud, Lois improvised.
*chokes*

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"More than a month of Christmas?" Lois couldn't decide whether she was in awe or pure catatonia at the thought of all that . . . cheer. "How can you stand it? I can barely tolerate the decorations they put up at the Planet in the middle of December."
Poor Lois *hugs favorite Grinch*

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Clark grabbed a bit of mistletoe, tacked it right outside the kitchen, and went back to his place by the stairs just as the door started to open.
Oooooooo I can see a plan forming. Sneaky Kryptonian pocket lint

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Martha called, "Stop, Lois!" She stopped.

Looking back to the Kent matriarch, Lois asked, "What's the matter?"

"Nothing," came the answer. "You're just standing under the mistletoe."
Bad Martha. Selling your houseguest out like that.

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Clark was walking toward her. *He'd better not do what I think he's going to do,* Lois thought to herself in vain. Clark grabbed the potato dish from her nerveless fingers, gently set it on the table just to her right, and--quick and soft--put his lips on hers.
Yep. Bad Clark. Bad Martha. And Jonathan has to be chuckling by now.

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*Hey, where'd he go?* Her thoughts contradicted themselves as Clark pulled back with a smile.
Hehehehehehehehe

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"Happy Thanksgiving, Lois," he said as Lois mused to herself, *Maybe the holidays aren't so bad after all.*
Awwwww

That was really sweet, Darcy smile

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Ditto what the others have said!

Thank you!

Twas wonderful! Smoochies and all wink .

Love the Martha/Energizer Bunny comparison! Tis so true!

Thank you!

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Very nice. I love early-Lois-in-Smallville stories. smile

Actually, I think Martha might have been the *model* for the Energizer Bunny. rotflol

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Very sweet, even if I do think that Clark was hanging mistletoe not to make Lois' holiday memories any better but just so he can steal smoochies. Shame on Martha for participating. laugh


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Very sweet. And I loved the Martha/Energizer Bunny analogy!

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Very sweet smile I like the image you set up of Martha.

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I agree with all other folcs-especially on the Energizer Bunny and lol Elisabeth on shame on Martha for not participating in hanging some Mistletoe! Maybe now that L and C have got things...* started* she will feel mroe inspired!

Anyway, sweet story Darcy and I really must get on the ball and read all the other ficathon tales!

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Very nice story Darcy. Very sweet. Not often that Clark gets to be the hero.

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aww! Very sweet! laugh I hope Lois enjoys the holidays more from then on. smile Well done, Darcy! thumbsup


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