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Re: FDK - Ficathon- The Final Countdown 1/1 #59169 01/03/09 06:35 AM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397 bellarase OP Beat Reporter
OP bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	Quote Originally posted by IolantheAlias: This is a great fic - Kerth-worthy, for sure. There were so many hilarious moments (bear with me if I repeat what so many others have posted): Quote In fact, it was more than just a little sickening to contemplate. Both Ralph and the impending end of the world. ... If anybody could put a bright spin on this huge rock-shaped curve ball that space was throwing at them, it was Martha Kent. Yes, that's Martha's superpower! Quote Help with what? Help with getting his nicely toned butt off the ledge before he falls and breaks his fool neck? Why, yes, Martha, I think he does need help there. Lois couldn't help but think derisively. Love the nicely-toned butt! Quote His own mother had tried to kill him! The last woman in the world that Lois would ever think was capable of such a thing had cold-heartedly tossed her son into a pile of garbage!....Lois didn't even want to contemplate what other murdering measures the Kents would employ to make sure their goal was achieved. And she had thought her own parents were bad! At best, they were inattentive. Martha and Jonathan Kent took bad parenting to a whole new level. ROTFL! Quote “Ok, first things first,” she told him. “We need to get your memory back. Then you have to go save the planet. Oh and then I have to yell at you for lying to me, but that can wait until after you save the lives of everyone on earth, I guess.” Glad to see that Lois has her priorities in order. Quote It was probably like a guy at Hooters – no matter how hard they try not to look, their eyes get drawn down towards the physical attributes in clear view. I think we need to enter this in a Best Line Contest somewhere. Quote “Here you go. Now why don't you go into the bathroom and change into your suit like a nice little amnesiac superhero.” More ROTFL! Other great lines: Quote The man did more for the suits than the suits did for the man – that much was clear. ... Briefly, she pondered if the term 'down to earth' still applied to somebody from another planet. And who could fly. ... “Now, go. Fly away. Save the world.” Great lines, all. WOW! Thank you for such amazing feedback!! hugs you LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK - Ficathon- The Final Countdown 1/1 #59170 01/03/09 10:55 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk Kerth
Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Loved your story. I thought you presented Lois and her 'snit' perfectly.

Re: FDK - Ficathon- The Final Countdown 1/1 #59171 01/07/09 10:48 PM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS	Oh, this was hilarious! Phenomenal! Quote Well, this put a little crimp in her plans. What was the etiquette for telling somebody with no memory who was a bit suicidal that you were in love with them? Hmmm... hard question. Quote Some might call her selfish but hey, she could live with that. Selfish, Lois? Nah... Quote Lois tapped her foot a bit impatiently. Really, how long was it going to take Martha to talk her son off the balcony, for Pete's sake? It wasn't as if they had all the time in the world! Quote Good for Martha. Hopefully she was telling Clark just how many shades of an idiot he was being. Something Lois intended to reinforce as soon as possible. Quote *Help with what? Help with getting his nicely toned butt off the ledge before he falls and breaks his fool neck? "His nicely toned butt..." What an image... But I'll shut up because this is the PG folder. Quote “Clark, you are so far from fine, it's not even funny! Your own mother just tried to kill you! Your mother, Clark!” Quote It was a good thing for Clark that she was here. Lois didn't even want to contemplate what other murdering measures the Kent's would employ to make sure their goal was achieved. Quote And she had thought her own parents were bad! At best, they were inattentive. Martha and Jonathan Kent took bad parenting to a whole new level. Quote “Help me remember, Lois,” Clark whispered, holding her tight. “Please.' And we go from hysterical laugh to wonderful WAFFy. Quote Now why don't you go into the bathroom and change into your suit like a nice little amnesiac superhero. /rolls on the floor laughing. Quote In the middle of making much needed coffee while Clark changed into his suit, a mouse had streaked across the floor of the kitchen, right in front of Lois. And a mouse saved Superman! Quote “Ok, fine, I don't plan on yelling... much.” Quote He turned expectantly in her direction, unprepared for the armful of Lois Lane he was suddenly in possession of. Just like when he'd taken off for the initial attack against the Nightfall asteroid, she surprised him with a kiss. Except this time Lois knew exactly who she was kissing. And it wasn't just Superman. She was also kissing Clark Kent and it was incredible. Awwwwwwww.... After this lengthy FDK you can see how much I loved your story. Please, keep on writing! I want more! Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK - Ficathon- The Final Countdown 1/1 #59172 01/11/09 11:21 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Neat story. James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: FDK - Ficathon- The Final Countdown 1/1 #59173 01/12/09 02:45 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	giggles madly You did a great job with this! ...and oh yeah, Clark Kent in spandex is most definitely a nice sight to behold. Especially THIS version of Clark Kent. (:drools:) Well done! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

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