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FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59546 01/10/09 06:43 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	What, no one has replied yet? And I get to start? Hah! I loved this. I completely looooved that Lois fooled Clark three times!!! Ann

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59547 01/10/09 07:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397 bellarase Beat Reporter
bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	Can i just say.... AWWWWW? This was the cutest thing I have read in a long time. I was smiling throughout. Your dialogue was just so... adorable! Loved the little notes Lois left and Clark not being able to figure it out. And the Smallville cracks were priceless. Thank you for writing this little ficcie that definitely put me a happy and silly mood! LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59548 01/10/09 09:52 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	I loved the description of the kiss, sweet and dangerous. I was perplexed why Clark was hoping Lois would win, I was surprised he admitted that he threw the game, and I was pleased at the ending. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59549 01/10/09 10:19 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands Saskia Top Banana
Saskia Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands	Thank you for an absolutely amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It had all the sweetness and cuteness I could've asked for. I smiled a lot as I read it, and even better, I kept going with 'aaaawwwwwww.' And what a coincidence that we were writing for each other. g Saskia I tawt I taw a puddy cat!

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59550 01/10/09 10:28 AM
Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas L Lieta Columnist
Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	Very, very cute, I loved the playfulness of Lois and Clark... and where it took them =D Sara "Lieta"

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59551 01/10/09 12:30 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Cuuuute! A very fuzzy story, thanks for sharing with us! JD "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59552 01/10/09 01:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Just adorable! Loved it. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59553 01/10/09 03:18 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis bobbart Top Banana
bobbart Top Banana Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis	This was great. After this I have to believe that Lois lane is the Sun Tzu of snowball fighting. Clark should recognize that fact and concede he will never beat her in this particular contest. (And then beg for lessons.) Bob

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59554 01/11/09 04:09 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida cp33 Columnist
cp33 Columnist Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida	Awwww, very waffy and a nice story to read on a morning when it is supposed to be 80 degrees in Janurary!

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59555 01/11/09 09:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Hi Amber! Just popping in to letting you know I'll be back here in a few days with real FDK Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59556 01/12/09 11:15 AM
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX A amberlea Columnist
amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	Hey everyone! Thanks for all the feedback! I'm glad you liked the story. Ann, thanks for the detailed feedback! I'm glad you liked Lois's antics - I figure she has to be able to best him at something. And it's somewhat of a relief that you liked the parts you quoted. I'm sometimes afraid my writing is too wordy, and I was concerned about those lines in particular. I never thought of it, but it is quite possible that Clark made up some of those rules! bellarata, I'm glad this fic was good for your mood! Elisabeth, I thought that was a fitting description of the beginning of their relationship with that kiss. Good to hear that you liked it! By the way, thanks so much to you and Carol for organizing this! I had a lot of fun! Saskia, I am thrilled that you liked this story! Mission accomplished. Sara, JD, and Laura, thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it! Bob, I think that description is pretty accurate. I'd love to be able to pull something like that off in real life! cp33, ugh, I know exactly how the 80 degrees in January feels. We had a few days of that last week ourselves. Unfortunatetly, writing/reading about snow just makes me miss it more! Michael, see you in a few! Thanks again, everyone! Amber

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59557 01/12/09 03:16 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	awww! that was so much fun! Gotta love that they both have their own set of rules for snowball fights! LOL! Well done - this made for one really cool snowball fight and a really cute fic! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: FDK: Rules of War 1/1 #59558 01/16/09 09:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Quote Lois stopped suddenly, mid-sentence, as she realized Clark was no longer walking next to her. Turning to look for him, she began, “What are you...” Once again cut off mid-sentence, Lois was momentarily rendered speechless as she stared first at the sleeve of her overcoat and then at Clark. Huh? Quote From a few paces back, where he had stopped to gather his frosty artillery Snowball fight? Quote Cured of speechlessness by Clark's taunting, Lois replied with a disdain that was mostly in jest. “Please. If this,” as she held out her ice-dusted sleeve, “is what you farm boys consider a snowball fight, then you have a thing or two to learn about urban winter warfare.” Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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