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FDK: Both Sides of the Coin (16/60+) #59794 01/13/09 08:20 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael OP Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	/looks/ No FDK-thread yet LnC in love are so cute. Lois head must be spinning right about now LOL to Clark springing a "meet the entire family"-bit on Lois The telepathy sure comes natural. Wondered a bit on Clark, CJ, and Lois held a teep-convo right in front of everybody. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin (16/60+) #59795 01/13/09 09:29 AM
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fuzzy Blogger F Joined: Aug 2008 Posts: 45	Great part! I sure love the whole telepathy thing! There sure are many people who know in this "universe"! I wonder what you wanted to hint at with the last remark by Lois about clark being more Superman than CJ? Is CJ going to step back or something? Well, I guess I have to wait and find out... Fuzzy

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin (16/60+) #59796 01/13/09 03:07 PM
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bobbart Top Banana Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis	At first this seemed to be just a transitional/building chapter. But, when I looked a bit more carefully, I wasn't so sure. This for instance: Quote a being sent here to help on this world SENT??!! I have to wonder if that's a good idea. Now this: Quote “Hi, I’m Martha Kent.” ... <Clark! You are dead!> is just plain fun. Bob

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin (16/60+) #59797 01/14/09 12:53 AM
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Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS	The telepathy will be particularly useful when Lois is gagged or thrown into a river and unable to shout "Help, Superman!" Now she'll just need to think it. "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin (16/60+) #59798 01/14/09 01:49 AM
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Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	Michael: Glad you liked this chapter... and =P to your last sentence, lol fuzzy: I added that on a whim... but I'm glad you're loving the telepathy =) Bob: Yeah... I was figuring that (since they don't know Krypton's gone) Lois and Clark were trying to set an air-tight background for Superman... but it does sound like something Trask wouldn't like, doesn't it? lol, on the Smallville scene... and I'm glad you agree on the 'x-ray vision.' As for the rest.... =X Andreia: lol, you're right, the telepathy does kinda dispell the need for 'Help! Superman!' Sara "Lieta"

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin (16/60+) #59799 01/14/09 06:18 AM
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Beth S. Columnist Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700	I continue to enjoy this story. The way you write the telepathy is great. It fits in seamlessly with the dialogue in a way that makes sense. There are a lot of interesting seeds planted here, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens.

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin (16/60+) #59800 01/14/09 10:51 AM
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Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	Hi, Beth, =) I'm glad you're liking the story and that the telepathy seems to fit. And I hope I do justice to the seeds I've planted, =) Sara "Lieta"

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