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Who's your buddy, who's your pal? Happy now?
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Oh, wow. More soon! Very great!  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Deliriously. The only thing I'd like more would be... more! I've become insatiable. The more I get, the more I want. This really is a very well-written story, and you have me captivated. Great job. 
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
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This was very nice.  Bob
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Hey, Bob,
I'm up for anything that saves us from Dan Scardino and Mayson Drake. :p
If you want in on the time-line-fixing brainstorming, shoot me an e-mail. That goes for anyone who thinks they have a knack for pseudo-physics hand-waving. I'm just in this for the screwing-with-Clark-and-Lois's head aspect. HGW gives me a headache, but he's got to be dealt with at some point.
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Happy Girl Happy Girl you made me a Happy girl too! I am in a puddle of gew on my floor. Sigh... Loved it. Now you said you were only in this for the screwing of their minds or lives, I'll take a little just plain old screwing with that too as an added bonus if you please<g> OK I know I have asked you this before but we are so deprived lately on the nfic board and you are such a darn good writer! More soon! Laura  
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Enjoying this immensely. I'm glad to see that Lois came clean. And of course Superman would save Allie. Now that he knows, how can he do any less?
Ah yes, you've screwed with their lives in a big way! Other posters have pointed out some possible fixes - what, if any, will you take?
Looking forward to seeing how you tie up some loose ends here!
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Originally posted by IolantheAlias:
Looking forward to seeing how you tie up some loose ends here! Yeah, me too. That's the thing, isn't it? You start off with this light little premise. 'Wouln't it be funny if 1st season Lois could see how her life would turn out?' And it leads to so many complications. Sigh. Seriously, though, it's coming along better than I had feared. At least, I like it. (The Forward story, I mean.)
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Difficult situation with Ally, that is for sure...
But I do not think that younger Lois, when she will return, can be indifferent to her future husband. Or HGW will put her back just before the switch.
Looking forward to your solution!
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Wow, you're posting quite frequently! I'm loving that and the story. I too am glad that future Lois came clean. They made the right decision to save Allie, but hopefully there won't be too many ripple effects from that change. This story (and Foreshadowing) cause a lot of complications for continuity. Now, both past Lois and Clark know their respective futures and that they will end up together. Certainly that must change things! Will be interesting to see how you put everything back together again. 
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So much for subtlety. I just hope this works out for her, since she's way in over her head on the preserving the timeline thing.
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