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FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 #6328 09/14/03 01:54 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi Jaxie, Great story! More soon, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 #6329 09/14/03 07:16 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA rivka Merriwether
rivka Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA	Wow, 15 parts all at once! I really enjoyed this, and look forward to your next fic! Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly. - Under the Tuscan Sun

Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 #6330 09/14/03 11:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Hey Jaxie, good work! I enjoyed this one Jimmy was very cute and Supergirl had a good debut. Some of your story parts were a little short... next story, you could post in longer sections. Though if you're posting all the parts at once, it's not that big a deal. Welcome to the boards! Hope you have fun here PJ

Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 #6331 09/19/03 12:06 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Finally getting a few minutes to catch up on these. I enjoyed this little adventure. You started off with an excellent hook, which immediately made me curious to read more. For someone like me, who's not as interested in the mythology and characters of the Superman universe, this was still a very interesting and enjoyable story. Nice use of the movie villains! I always found them the most interesting and the second movie the most enjoyable, so it was fun to see them out and about again, creating havoc. <g> Eeep - you had me worried for poor Jimmy there for a time! I thought maybe you were going to make Tank's day. (You might have figured by now that Jimmy isn't his favourite character) Quote “Don’t you have some film to develop?” Clark asked. Poor Jimmy. And a sweet little ending, too. This was a fun reworking of some familiar characters, Jaxie. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 #6332 09/19/03 03:12 AM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 90 USA Jaxie Freelance Reporter
Jaxie Freelance Reporter Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 90 USA	Quote Eeep - you had me worried for poor Jimmy there for a time! I thought maybe you were going to make Tank's day. (You might have figured by now that Jimmy isn't his favourite character) I know a little . . . what's his adversion to Jimmy? Quote And a sweet little ending, too. This was a fun reworking of some familiar characters, Jaxie. Thank you so much, Lab! And thanks for the advice; I've taken it to heart, and you were right! Jaxie I'm too young and boyish to go to jail. - "Top Copy" Who's your buddy, huh, who's your pal? - "Tempus Fugitive" Chief, instead of always standing around watching Lois and Clark, wondering what they're doing, what if we got lives of our own that were a little more interesting? - "And the Answer Is . . ."

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