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Hi, Great story.  Beautiful and sweet.  MAF 
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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I agree with Maria, Julie  I had read the first two parts and couldn't wait for the rest. Great beginning!! Hope to see more from you soon. AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Wow that was a fast deal. Nice. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Julie,
That was sweet--but you've left enough loose ends for a <gasp> sequel! <bg> More, please?
Laura
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Aww, poor Lois... I'm glad Clark caught her and got the truth out of her, for both their sakes. And I like the little offhand reference to what I assume was a revelation, after which Clark was lucky to get out with his spleen intact...  I was a little surprised that she would know she was pregnant that fast. Unless of course this was a baby conceived during Tempus Fugitive and they just didn't remember it. Maybe I'm slow, but it always took me about a month to start suspecting I was pregnant with my kids. That nitpick aside, this was a really sweet story. PJ
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Cute Sweet the next? :p Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Glad you finished this one, Julie - just wanted to echo the other comments really. A sweet little debut. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Thanks everybody! It really means a lot to me that you like my very first story! And for those who requested a sequal, I'll see what I can do.
Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?
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Cute sweet story Julie
what's next
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Julie This is a lovely story.  I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing it. Tricia 
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