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#64945 07/17/09 02:09 PM
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I actually got some writing done this week. I mean, it was about 10 words, but you know, if I write 10 words a week, I might finish this story sometime before Rye has her first grandchild...

Comments welcome, although it seems doubtful that they'll inspire me to write. If someone could teach my daughter to sleep at night, though, that might help. Maybe...

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Poor Clark is so tortured. He needs Lois to figure it out for herself so that he can see that someone can know and not be repulsed.

I love that he confronted Paul. I'm just afraid that's going to backfire with Lois...

Sorry to hear about the lack of sleep...all I can say is that I can empathize, and it's no fun. frown

But I love this story! smile

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Hmmm... Hmm... Hmm...

Let's see...

Clark took off again. That's something that will surely not backfire at all. Ugh-uh.

Clark talked to Paul, threatened not to grace the Titan with his presence. And almost got his pants charmed off by the pig in chief. But Paul does seem a bit cocky there. Doesn't he realize that there is an original out there and people can just prove it? Even Luthor isn't that arrogantly overconfident.

Nancy, you're killing me here dizzy

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#64948 07/22/09 11:01 AM
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Sorry, this week has gotten a little out of hand. Rye was a little fussy (we think she didn't like my eating some very spicy food - she's okay with some spice, but not too much apparently) and my husband went back to work. Neither of these should have meant I'd disappear off the face of the earth, but together it meant I was pretty much busy all of the time. Luckily, the spice or whatever it was is out of her system now and it was much easier - maybe a bit too easy as she's been sleeping all day.

Amber - I'm glad that you liked Clark confronting Paul. I was unsure if that would just seem too meddling. But you can guess how Lois will feel about this without my having to post the next chapter, I would think.

Michael - You are right - Paul is cockier than Luther ever was. My thought is that Paul is young. I think not only do people learn as they age, but there is an age (not sure when but maybe between 15 and 20ish?) when you are nearly an adult, but don't tend to think things through enough - it's unusual to make decisions thinking about the long term. So, if asked Paul would know that there's an original out there, but in his head, Lois, who has the original, is unlikely to expose him. He hasn't considered that Professor Williams may read the paper and recognize that he hasn't made significant changes. Or if he does, he hasn't thought through what the consequences of that would be.


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