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#65513 08/06/09 12:00 PM
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As mentioned in the chapter itself, I don't expect to be online this weekend. We are also going away for a night or two sometime next week, so I think I'll be able to respond to feedback early next week, I may be wrong. I'll get online as soon as I can, though.

As always, all sorts of feedback is welcome.

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sad. teenage angst - thank goodness i skipped that stage...

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Clark's got some serious self-loathing going on - I hope that he can come to some sort of a resolution.

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“Well don’t!” I told her. “I don’t need your help. How can you anyway? Have you ever been in a real relationship? How would you have any idea how to fix this?” I was nearly shouting at her now. Some small part of me felt badly. This wasn’t Lois’ fault. I knew that. But I couldn’t help it. Maybe being angry at her was easier than being angry at myself.

“I wouldn’t,” Lois said firmly, but there were tears swimming in her eyes. “Sorry. I thought I was being a friend, but clearly I still have a lot to learn about that.” She turned to precede me into the classroom, but at the last minute I turned around and walked back out the door.
Poor Lois. She really does need a lot of practice interacting with people. Or just get over the preconceptions that have been instilled in her by those "guidance" counselors.

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“I told you – you were going to consider a course for next semester but not be sure if you should take it. What did you decide?”

I flushed. I hadn’t decided on my courses for next semester yet. I had until the end of the week and with all the things going on right now, I hadn’t even opened the course catalog since the day Star had last mentioned it to me. “I… um… haven’t decided yet.”
Another one of Star's half-correct guesses?

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“I don’t get it,” Lois said, but then rushed on. “You know if you told me what was wrong, maybe I could help.”
Now that would be a hoot. Clark tells Lois his secret but not Maddie hyper

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Thanks for the comments!

Sarah - Did you really skip this stage? If so, I'm jealous!

IolantheAlias - Yup, this is a critical part of Clark's personality right now - he's not really comfortable in his own skin.

Michael - For Star and her prediction about the course - I see it as true, but Clark hasn't gotten to the point of being confused about it yet so it's not true yet (and Star hasn't predicted that he hasn't looked at the course catalog yet). Although, I should say that I never really did anything with this. I was planning to show the indecision, but never got to it...

Well, I'm not sure if Friday counts as soon, but the next chapter will be posted then.


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