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I am so addicted to this story that it's just sad. It is very unique, and I LOVE it!! clap Kal's innocence and desire to help his people along with Lois being in a situation where she is so completely out of her element is wonderful. Seeing them fall in love and explore that love has me hooked.
Looking forward to the next installment which I hope comes very, very soon!


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Michael
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So, if Lois where to offer her life to Kal in exchange for being with him for as long as her natural life allows, would that be still within the rules?
Good question! The answer will be in those dusty volumes Lois saw in the chambers on her first day on NK. I could go and spend a few hours researching them if you wanted ... instead of writing more of the fic laugh

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Lois, you do know his ‘face’ is a bit higher up, right?
*Lois* was trying to be good!

Thanks, Michael.

Rac and SJH smile1

Kathy

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Porn is the natural next step, right?
dizzy :p

Sheila Posted. smile

Ann Your 'Kalvin' post is more relevant that you'd think!

Mel Thanks, Mel. I'm glad you're enjoying the ride.


Thanks everyone

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I still think Nor should read here for ideas!
Honestly, I thought Nor did it.

I guess I misread or misunderstood the part about the weapons, but it was my impression that the parents were unarmed. I was (am?) unclear how two unarmed ordinary citizens could overpower their armed guards, killing them in the process. It also seemed odd that they would have the courage to even attempt to kill the Supreme Leader's guards, as the people on New Krypton don't seem given to standing up to authority figures.

Also, their original request was the life of the murderer's daughter, which seemed "fair" in a convoluted and grotesque meaning of the word - but slaughtering the entire family struck me as overkill (no pun intended). The original demand for the daughter's life, by the way, was what I thought Nor was referring to when he commented about how easy it was to manipulate them.

And the suicide at the end was just way too convenient. So, I assumed Nor or his men had committed the murders and arranged it to look like a murder/suicide. Which is why it seemed especially ironic that the parents (who, I had assumed, were not only murdered in cold blood but also framed for the entire masacre) were all the more victims in the sense that they couldn't even defend themselves, because Kal had confiscated their weapons.

When I read it, I thought *you* were the evil one. I don't know what to make of the fact that this diabolical scheme turns out to be an invention of *my* imagination, not yours! dizzy


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Vicki

Thanks for your explanation.

From Part 12 ...
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He had ordered them to hand in their weapons.

Eventually, they had agreed there would be no bloodshed.
Here's what I was thinking - they lied about there being no bloodshed, so it was possible they lied (by omission) and only handed in some of their weapons.

Your thoughts make sense - given what I wrote.

Thanks to you, I can see that it is ambiguous, so I'll make it clearer before it goes to the archive.

Of course, it is also possible that Nor gave them more weapons, but I didn't intend to suggest the suicides were murders.

Knowing murderers are executed promptly, I thought suicide was a reasonable possibility - particularly if they felt they couldn't face their grief over the death of their child.

And Nor, of course, would have encouraged it - to cover the trail back to him.

This incident will be mentioned again - and a little more of Nor's motivation will be explained.

Thanks Vicki

Corrina.

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